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YUte

May 26, 2025

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Nice to meet you

My name is YUte.
I want to speak English about a use in my job and to be qualify.

This is my self introduction. I would be happy to read it.
-I was Pole vault athlete.
- I worked to elementary school & secondary school in Aomori prefecture.
- In elementary school, I supported for student of first grade, more over, In secondary school, I taught health and physical education for all of the student & worked with student with impairment (Hearing impairment)
- I worked in companies that help people find work for persons with impairments about for person with learning disabilities & mentally challenged person.
- In my current company, I supported Country-focused Program & Coral Propagation Laboratory in Okinawa.
- My plans to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairment.

Thank you.

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Nice to meet you

My name is YUte.

I want to speak enough English about a use in my job and to be qualifyto be qualified for my job.

This is my self introduction.

I would be happy toif you could read it.

-I was Pam a former pole vault athleter.

- I worked toat both elementary school &and secondary schools in Aomori prefecture.

- InAt the elementary school, I suppwortked forwith student ofs in the first grade, more over, In. At the secondary school, I taught health and physical education for all of the student &s, and worked with students with impairment (Hho have hearing impairment) s.
- I worked in companies that help people
find work for persons with impairments about for person with learning disabilities & mentally challenged personwith impairments, such as learning or intellectual disabilities, find jobs.

"In elementary school" could sound like you were a student.
If you were a teacher for first grade students, it would be better to say "I was a first grade teacher." or "I taught first grade"
"Mentally challenged person" is outdated and may be considered offensive, its better to use "people with intellectual disabilities"

- In my current company, I supported the Country-focused Program & the Coral Propagation Laboratory in Okinawa.

- My plan is to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairmentdisabilities.

"Impairments" is correct, but "disabilities" is more common.

Thank you.

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YUte

May 27, 2025

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Thank you for the advice!

My name is YUute.

I want to speak English about aenough to use in my job and to be qualifyied.

Not sure of the meaning

I would be happy for you to read it.

-I was Pa pole vault athlete.

- I worked toat an elementary school & secondary school in Aomori prefecture.

- In elementary school, I supported for student of first grade, more over, In secondary school, I taught health and physical education for all of the student &first and second graders and also worked with students with impairment (Hhearing impairment) s.
- I worked
for/in companies that help people find work for persons with impairments about for personimpaired people with learning disabilities &and who are mentally challenged person.

- My plans are to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairment.

YUte's avatar
YUte

May 27, 2025

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Thank you very much! My learning is enhanced.

- My plans to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairment.


- My plans are to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairment.

- My plan is to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairmentdisabilities.

"Impairments" is correct, but "disabilities" is more common.

Thank you.


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- In my current company, I supported Country-focused Program & Coral Propagation Laboratory in Okinawa.


- In my current company, I supported the Country-focused Program & the Coral Propagation Laboratory in Okinawa.

Nice to meet you


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My name is YUte.


My name is YUute.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak English about a use in my job and to be qualify.


I want to speak English about aenough to use in my job and to be qualifyied.

Not sure of the meaning

I want to speak enough English about a use in my job and to be qualifyto be qualified for my job.

This is my self introduction.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I would be happy to read it.


I would be happy for you to read it.

I would be happy toif you could read it.

-I was Pole vault athlete.


-I was Pa pole vault athlete.

-I was Pam a former pole vault athleter.

- I worked to elementary school & secondary school in Aomori prefecture.


- I worked toat an elementary school & secondary school in Aomori prefecture.

- I worked toat both elementary school &and secondary schools in Aomori prefecture.

- In elementary school, I supported for student of first grade, more over, In secondary school, I taught health and physical education for all of the student & worked with student with impairment (Hearing impairment) - I worked in companies that help people find work for persons with impairments about for person with learning disabilities & mentally challenged person.


- In elementary school, I supported for student of first grade, more over, In secondary school, I taught health and physical education for all of the student &first and second graders and also worked with students with impairment (Hhearing impairment) s.
- I worked
for/in companies that help people find work for persons with impairments about for personimpaired people with learning disabilities &and who are mentally challenged person.

- InAt the elementary school, I suppwortked forwith student ofs in the first grade, more over, In. At the secondary school, I taught health and physical education for all of the student &s, and worked with students with impairment (Hho have hearing impairment) s.
- I worked in companies that help people
find work for persons with impairments about for person with learning disabilities & mentally challenged personwith impairments, such as learning or intellectual disabilities, find jobs.

"In elementary school" could sound like you were a student. If you were a teacher for first grade students, it would be better to say "I was a first grade teacher." or "I taught first grade" "Mentally challenged person" is outdated and may be considered offensive, its better to use "people with intellectual disabilities"

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