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ryota

Oct. 29, 2020

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Nice to meet you

HI,I'm Ryota.I'm 30 years old.
I’m civil servant.
I like listen to music,playing sports,and riding motor bike.
I like rock music.For example,Aerosmith,AC/DC,U2,Van Halen and so on.
My favorite sports is baseball.I usually that every weekend with my coworkers.
I have Harley Davidson.I want to ride long distance,but I don’t have time.It will be cold on winter,to ride bike is hard...


はじめましてリョウタです。30歳です。
私は公務員です。
私は音楽を聞くこと、スポーツをすること、バイクに乗ることが好きです。
私はロックミュージックが好きで、エアロスミスやいろいろな音楽が好きです。
私は野球が好きで、だいたい週末は同僚と野球をしています。私はハーレーダビッドソンを持っています。長い距離を運転したいのですが、時間がありません。これから冬になって寒くなると、バイクに乗るのは厳しくなります。

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Nice to meet you

HI,i, I'm Ryota. I'm 30 years old.

I’m a civil servant.

I like listening to music, playing sports, and riding my motor bike.

I like rock music. For example, Aerosmith, AC/DC, U2, Van Halen and so on.

My favorite sports is baseball. I usually play that every weekend with my coworkers.

I have a Harley Davidson. I want to ride it for a long distance, but I don’t have time. It will be cold oin winter,t so rideing a bike iswill be hard...

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HI,I'm Ryota.I'm 30 years old.


HI,i, I'm Ryota. I'm 30 years old.

I’m civil servant.


I’m a civil servant.

I like listen to music,playing sports,and riding motor bike.


I like listening to music, playing sports, and riding my motor bike.

I like rock music.For example,Aerosmith,AC/DC,U2,Van Halen and so on.


I like rock music. For example, Aerosmith, AC/DC, U2, Van Halen and so on.

My favorite sports is baseball.I usually that every weekend with my coworkers.


My favorite sports is baseball. I usually play that every weekend with my coworkers.

I have Harley Davidson.I want to ride long distance,but I don’t have time.It will be cold on winter,to ride bike is hard...


I have a Harley Davidson. I want to ride it for a long distance, but I don’t have time. It will be cold oin winter,t so rideing a bike iswill be hard...

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