Jan. 8, 2022
Nice Coincidence
Nice Coincidence
Almost 10 years ago I joined a friend’s party.
It was a family party full of kids.
So, I played with her daughter and other kids.
It was fun memories.
I meet this friend few days ago and her work place.
When I should my ID card to her.
She laughed loud.
Because my birth day is same as her daughter.
She said no wonder why at that date her daughter like to play with me so much.
Can science explain that?
Nice Coincidence
Nice Coincidence
Almost 10 years ago I joined a friend’s party.
It was a family party full of kids.
So, I played with her daughter and other kids.
There's no need for a comma after 'so'
It was fun memories.
'I made fun memories' would be more correct
I meet this friend few days ago andt her work place.
When I shoulwed my ID card to her.
She laughed loudly.
'laughed' is a verb so you need an adverb
Because my birth day is the same as her daughter.
She said no wonder why at that date her daughter liked to play with me so much.
The meaning is a little unclear here - maybe She said, "No wonder why my daughter liked playing with you so much at that party."
Can science explain that?
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Great work! The meaning is very clear overall - there was only one sentence which was a little confusing, otherwise the mistakes are very small. Bravo, and keep up the excellent effort!
Almost 10 years ago I joinattended a friend’s party.
Joined implies you joined and thats all, if you went along to the party and stayed a while, it would be better to say I went to the party or I attended the party
So, I played with her daughter and the other kids.
It wasThey are fun memories.
It was fun, or They are fun memories
I meet this friend a few days ago andt her work place.
When I shoulwed my ID card to her.
She laughed aloud.
Because mMy birth day is same as her daughter's.
She said n" No wonder why at that date hertime, my daughter liked to play with meyou so much".
if you want to report speech you need the "" and report what she said. if its not a quote you might say She commented that ...
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Almost 10 years ago I joined a friend’s party. Almost 10 years ago I Joined implies you joined and thats all, if you went along to the party and stayed a while, it would be better to say I went to the party or I attended the party This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a family party full of kids. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, I played with her daughter and other kids. So, I played with her daughter and the other kids. So There's no need for a comma after 'so' |
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It was fun memories.
It was fun, or They are fun memories It was fun memories. 'I made fun memories' would be more correct |
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I meet this friend few days ago and her work place. I me I me |
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When I should my ID card to her. When I sho When I sho |
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She laughed loud. She laughed aloud. She laughed loudly. 'laughed' is a verb so you need an adverb |
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Because my birth day is same as her daughter.
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She said no wonder why at that date her daughter like to play with me so much. She said if you want to report speech you need the "" and report what she said. if its not a quote you might say She commented that ... She said no wonder why at that date her daughter liked to play with me so much. The meaning is a little unclear here - maybe She said, "No wonder why my daughter liked playing with you so much at that party." |
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Can science explain that? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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