First Diary Entry. First Diary Entry.

A first diary means the first book that you are writing in

First Diary. Entry First Diary Entry

Today, I'm starting to write a diary from today. Today, I'm starting to write a diary

I'm starting to write a diary from today. I'm starting to write a diary today.

You don't need a preposition with "today"

I'm startgoing to write a diary entry starting from today. I'm going to write a diary entry starting from today.

I'm starwriting to write a diary froma diary starting today. I'm writing a diary starting today.

"From today" sounds a bit wrong in this context, so I reordered the sentence so it makes more sense.

I'm starting to write a diary from todaynow on. I'm starting to write a diary from now on.

This sounds a bit more natural

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentences. Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentences.

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentence. Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentence.

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to be able to write correct English sentences. Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to be able to write correct English sentences.

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correctaccurate English sentences. Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write accurate English sentences.

"Correct" usually refers to getting a question right, accurate makes more sense in this context. Also, because you are refering to mulitple sentences, you add an s and make it plural.

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentences. Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentences.

My diary will be included about my daily studyingies of English, my family and activities. My diary will include my daily studies of English, my family and activities.

My diary will be included information about my daily studying of English, my family and activities. My diary will include information about my daily studying of English, my family and activities.

Include can be in the present tense, I would also use the preposition about to describe the subjects you will write about

My diary will be includedtalk about my daily studying of English, my family and my activities. My diary will talk about my daily study of English, my family and my activities.

My diary will be included about my daily studying of English, my family and other activities. My diary will include my daily studying of English, my family and other activities.

"Be included" doesn't make sense, so make it a verb form. Also, and_ activities sounds off because there were descriptions of every other item, so I added an other.

My diary will be included about my daily studying of English, my family and activities. My diary will include my daily studying of English, my family and activities.

include and about kind of refers to the same thing so do not usually come together

I really hope this output beingdiary is helpfull for my learning. I really hope this diary is helpful for my learning.

I really hope this output beingwill be helpfull for my learning. I really hope this output will be helpful for my learning.

will be shows that the action will happen in the future helpful is spelled with only one l at the end of the word

I really hope this output beingwill be helpfull for my learning. I really hope this output will be helpful for my learning.

I really hope this output being helpfull for my learning. I really hope this output being helpful for my learning.

"Helpful" is spelled with one l. This is generally true for all other words like this (beautiful, plentiful, etc.).

I really hope this output beingis helpfull for my learning. I really hope this output is helpful for my learning.

Now, I'm relaxing on the weekend. Now, I'm relaxing on the weekend.

Now, I'm having/enjoying a relaxing weekend. Now, I'm having/enjoying a relaxing weekend.

we would use a verb in this sentence

Now, I'mFor now, I will be relaxing for the weekend. For now, I will be relaxing for the weekend.

Now, I'm having a relaxing weekend. Now, I'm having a relaxing weekend.

"am" is a helping verb, so you need a stronger verb before you get to the noun. Additionally, "am" means you are ---, so it doesn't make sense here.

Now, I'm relaxing weeken that it's the weekend, I'm more relaxed. Now that it's the weekend, I'm more relaxed.

I have already done a few erreands, alrady. I have already done a few errands.

I have done a few erreands, already. I have done a few errands already.

a few spelling issues, errands is spelled with an "a", already is spelled with an "e", you don't need a comma before already

I have already done a few erreands, alrady. I have already done a few errands.

I have doneran a few erreands, already. I have ran a few errands already.

Just a few mispellings here! Also, usually you say that you "run an errand" instead.

I have done a few erreands, already. I have done a few errands already.

I droped off and picked up my daughter tofrom her dance lesson. I droped off and picked up my daughter from her dance lesson.

I droped off and picked up my daughter to dance lesson. I have dropped off my daughter for her dance lesson and picked her up I droped off and picked up my daughter to dance lesson. I have dropped off my daughter for her dance lesson and picked her up

I dropped off and picked upthen fetched my daughter tofor her dance lessons. I dropped off and then fetched my daughter for her dance lessons.

I droped off and picked up my daughter tofor her dance lesson. I droped off and picked up my daughter for her dance lesson.

To doesn't make sense in respect to pick up, so just say for.

I dropped off and picked up my daughter tofor dance lesson, then picked her up later. I dropped off my daughter for dance lesson, then picked her up later.

And I cooked yakisoba (Japanese fried noodle dish) for lunch. And I cooked yakisoba (Japanese fried noodle dish) for lunch.

And II had also cooked yakisoba (Japanese fried noodle dish) for lunch. I had also cooked yakisoba (Japanese fried noodle dish) for lunch.

MNow, my daughter is doing maths text, nowwork. Now, my daughter is doing maths work.

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My daughter is doing maths text, now. My daughter is doing her math homework now My daughter is doing maths text, now. My daughter is doing her math homework now

you don't need a comma before "now"

My daughter is doing maths texther math homework, now. My daughter is doing her math homework, now.

(This is my best guess at what you meant to say.)

My daughter is doing maths text, homework now. My daughter is doing math homework now.

Text may mean a passage or writing, but we usually don't use it in respect to homework.

My daughter is doing maths text,her math assignment now. My daughter is doing her math assignment now.

She seems to enjoying to studying new knowledge. She seems to enjoy studying new knowledge.

She seems to enjoying to study new knowledge. learning new things She seems to enjoy learning new things

She seems to be enjoying to study new knowledgeing and learning new things. She seems to be enjoying studying and learning new things.

She seems to enjoying to studying new knowledgethings. She seems to enjoy studying new things.

She seems to enjoying to study learning new knowledge. She seems to enjoy learning new knowledge.

Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedbacks! Thanks for reading, I wish to get some feedback!

Thanks for reading, and I wishhope to get some feedbacks! Thanks for reading, and I hope to get some feedbacks!

Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedbacks! Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedback!

"Feedback" is a mass noun, so it doesn't take a plural ending.

Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedbacks! Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedback!

Feedback is always singular, you never add an s.

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