Oct. 23, 2023
NHL Game Notes
Winnipeg Jets – Florida Panthers – 6:4
1) At the beginning 2nd period teams exchanged goals within 10 seconds of 1st minute. The Panthers scored first and after The Jets made it too.
2) The hosts had been dominating in 2nd period except 1st minute. They could score right away after 2nd goal, but Bobrovsky made some huge saves. Only in the middle of period they had led. Statistic argues their advantage. The Jets shot 16 times and their opponents only 10 times.
3) The Jets scored in the minority at 15th minute of the 3rd period. It made center Adam Lowry. It became 5-2.
4) The head coach of Panthers had removed the goalkeeper 4 minutes left. His decision helped. The guests scored twice since 3:29 till 2:24 left of 3rd period. They reduced the gap to one goal. The Jets eventually won by scoring the 6th goal into an empty net.
Winnipeg Jets – Florida Panthers – 6:4
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1) At the beginning of the 2nd period teams exchanged goals within 10ten seconds of 1the first minute.
The Panthers scored first and after Tthat the Jets made itscored too.
2) The hosts had been dominating in the 2nd period except 1for the first minute.
They could have scored right away after the 2nd goal, but Bobrovsky made some huge saves.
OnlyThey only led in the middle of the period they had led.
Statistics arguesd their advantage.
The Jets shot 16sixteen times and their opponents only 10ten times.
3) The Jets scored in the minority at 15the fifteenth minute of the 3rd period.
It made center Adam Lowry.
I am not certain what is meant here. Maybe "It made a center to Adam Lowry".
4) The head coach of Panthers had removed the goalkeeper 4with four minutes left.
The guests scored twice sincefrom 3:29 untill 2:24 was left of the 3rd period.
They reduced the gap to one goal.
The Jets eventually won by scoring the 6th goal into an empty net.
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It became 5-2. |
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It made center Adam Lowry. It made center Adam Lowry. I am not certain what is meant here. Maybe "It made a center to Adam Lowry". |
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NHL Game Notes |
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Winnipeg Jets – Florida Panthers – 6:4 1) At the beginning 2nd period teams exchanged goals within 10 seconds of 1st minute. Winnipeg Jets – Florida Panthers – 6:4 |
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The Panthers scored first and after The Jets made it too. The Panthers scored first and after |
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2) The hosts had been dominating in 2nd period except 1st minute. 2) The host |
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They could score right away after 2nd goal, but Bobrovsky made some huge saves. They could have scored right away after the 2nd goal, but Bobrovsky made some huge saves. |
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Only in the middle of period they had led.
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Statistic argues their advantage. Statistics argue |
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The Jets shot 16 times and their opponents only 10 times. The Jets shot |
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3) The Jets scored in the minority at 15th minute of the 3rd period. 3) The Jets scored in the minority at |
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4) The head coach of Panthers had removed the goalkeeper 4 minutes left. 4) The head coach of Panthers had removed the goalkeeper |
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His decision helped. |
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The guests scored twice since 3:29 till 2:24 left of 3rd period. The guests scored twice |
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They reduced the gap to one goal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The Jets eventually won by scoring the 6th goal into an empty net. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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