Sept. 15, 2021
Home Vacation
I really liked to go abroad during my vacations.
If I had a chance, i went to Japan or China once a year.
These days, it isn’t possible because of Covid-19
This time, I just stayed at home during my 3 days vacation last week.
At first, it was very boring since I couldn’t see anything outside.
However, I finally enjoyed spending my time at home.
I read many books, watched videos.
In the end, I changed my mind that the home vacation was also good.
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Home Vacation
I really liked to go abroad during my vacations.
If I had a chance, iI went to Japan or China once a year.
If I had a chance, I went to Japan or China once a year.
Capital 'I' :)
These days, it isn’t possible because of Covid-19
This time, I just stayed at home during my 3 days vacation last week.
This time, I just stayed at home during my 3 day vacation last week.
It's confusing because obviously you are talking about multiple days but in this context you need to say '3 day vacation' not '3 days vacation' :)
At first, it was very boring since I couldn’t see anything outside.
However, I finally enjoyed spending my time at home.
I read many books, and watched videos.
I read many books and watched videos.
In the end, I changed my mind that thea home vacation was also good.
In the end, I changed my mind that a home vacation was also good.
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Great writing! Everything you say is easy to understand and it was only one or two grammar rules that needed correcting :)
Sept. 16, 2021
Thank you so much!
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Home vacation |
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I really liked to go abroad during my vacations. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If I had a chance, i went to Japan or china once a year. |
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These days, it isn’t possible because of Covid-19 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This time, i just stayed at home during my 3 days vacation last week. |
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At first, it was very boring since I couldn’t see anything outside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However I finally enjoyed spending my time at home . |
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I read many books, watched videos.
I read many books |
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In the end, I changed my mind that home vacation was also good. |
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Home Vacation This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If I had a chance, i went to Japan or China once a year.
If I had a chance, Capital 'I' :) |
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This time, I just stayed at home during my 3 days vacation last week.
This time, I just stayed at home during my 3 day It's confusing because obviously you are talking about multiple days but in this context you need to say '3 day vacation' not '3 days vacation' :) |
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However, I finally enjoyed spending my time at home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the end, I changed my mind that the home vacation was also good.
In the end, I changed my mind that |
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