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Journal 11/24/20

I once thought I was not so stupid, I could learn English well in a relatively short time. After learning it for more than one year, I have to admit that my very beginning thought was totally wrong. To learn a foreign language well, you have to master a lot of skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing. And each skill would take at least one year in my opinion. Learning languages needs to be very patient and you can’t be in a hurry, or it will backfire. Although I still want to master English as soon as possible, I have to be very patient with it.

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To learn a foreign language well, you have to master a lot of skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing.

And each skill would take at least one year in my opinion.

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Journal 11/24/20


I once thought I was not so stupid, I could learn English well in a relatively short time.


I once thought I was not so stupid,. I thought I could learn English well in a relatively short time. I once thought I was not so stupid. I thought I could learn English well in a relatively short time.

Joining with a comma does not work here. The proper join would be the semicolon ";" I think. Almost no one knows how to use a semicolon, including me. "I once thought I was not so stupid; I could learn English well in a relatively short time."

After learning it for more than one year, I have to admit that my very beginning thought was totally wrong.


After learning it for more than one year, I have to admit that my very beginningfirst thought was totally wrong. After learning it for more than one year, I have to admit that my first thought was totally wrong.

To learn a foreign language well, you have to master a lot of skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing.


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And each skill would take at least one year in my opinion.


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Learning languages needs to be very patient and you can’t be in a hurry, or it will backfire.


Learning languagesYou needs to be very patient when learning languages and you can’t be in a hurry, or it will backfire. You need to be very patient when learning languages and you can’t be in a hurry, or it will backfire.

"Learning languages" is not something that can "be patient." People, even animals can be patient, but not ideas.

Although I still want to master English as soon as possible, I have to be very patient with it.


Although I still want to master English as soon as possible, I have to be very patient with it. Although I still want to master English as soon as possible, I have to be very patient .

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