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Why job is important except for making money ?

People have jobs because they want to find the meaning to live. If they spend most of time in their house, they would think "what am I doing now, everyone would work or study about this time. I have to something or find my dream." People tend to compare with others. When you listen to someone's success and if you feel uncomfortable , which represents you aren't satisfied with yourself. But if you work, at least you contribute to society and help someone, and if you feel your job is boring, you can find another thing you really want to do. Therefore having job is important because they can find their dream and the meaning to live.

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People tend to compare with others.


People tend to compare themselves with others. People tend to compare themselves with others.

Why job is important except for making money ?


Why job iare Jobs iImportant except for mApart from Making mMoney ? Why are Jobs Important Apart from Making Money?

Capitalize titles :) "Except" is the same as "apart from". In this context, I thought "apart" sounded more natural.

People have jobs because they want to find the meaning to live.


People have jobs because they want to find the meaning to liva purpose. People have jobs because they want to find a purpose.

Or: "People have jobs because they need a means to live." Your sentence can have a few meanings, so I gave another example.

If they spend most of time in their house, they would think "what am I doing now, everyone would work or study about this time.


If they spend most of time in theirheir time at housme, they wcould think, "wWhat am I doing now, eright now? Everyone wouldelse is working or study about this timeing. If they spend most of their time at home, they could think, "What am I doing right now? Everyone else is working or studying.

I have to something or find my dream."


I have to do something or find my dream." I have to do something or find my dream."

When you listen to someone's success and if you feel uncomfortable , which represents you aren't satisfied with yourself.


When you listen to hear about someone's success and if you feel uncomfortable , which represents it can indicate you aren't satisfied with yourself. When you hear about someone's success and feel uncomfortable, it can indicate you aren't satisfied with yourself.

But if you work, at least you contribute to society and help someone, and if you feel your job is boring, you can find another thing you really want to do.


But if you work, at least you contribute to society and help someone, and ipeople. If you feel your job is boring, you can find another thing you really want to do. But if you work, at least you contribute to society and help people. If you feel your job is boring, you can find another thing you really want to do.

Therefore having job is important because they can find their dream and the meaning to live.


Therefore having a job is important because theyyou can find theiyour dream and the meaning to liva purpose. Therefore having a job is important because you can find your dream and a purpose.

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