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Patrizia_94

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I am planning a trip to London, with my boyfriend.

We chose that city because we have two friends living there, Luke And Sara. They are a couple and they met in Andorra eight years ago.

I have never been to Grain Britain, and i´m very excited! However, my boyfriend was in London twice.
So, the idea is to go the first week of March, and be only in London for around five days. But I don't know if it is enough... i think that there are a lot of things to do!! but i don't have more days of holidays.
I was looking for activities to do, and some of them are the following: Big Ben, Buckingham Palace, British Museum, Tower of London, The Shard Viewpoint, and Warner Bros. Studio (because I am a Harry Potter fan!)

I hope it will be a beautiful trip.

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I am planning a trip to London, with my boyfriend.

We chose that city because we have two friends living there, Luke And Sara.

They are a couple and they met in Andorra eight years ago.

I have never been to Graineat Britain, and I'm very excited!

It's a good alternative name! ;)

However, my boyfriend whas inbeen to London twice.

So, the idea is to go the first week of March, and be only stay in London for around five days.

You can put 'only' before the verb: 'only stay' or at the end of the phrase: 'stay in London for around five days only.'

But I don't know if it is enough...

i think that there are a lot of things to do!!

but iI don't have any more days of holidaysf.

or 'but I don't have any more annual leave.' or 'but I don't have any more holiday days'

I was looking for activities to do, and some of them are the following: Big Ben, Buckingham Palace, British Museum, Tower of London, The Shard Viewpoint, and Warner Bros.

Good options! :) Can I also suggest Madame Tussauds and the London Dungeons; also, some of these names need 'the' in front of them, i.e. 'The Tower of London' and 'The British Museum'.

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I hope you have a great time! :)

I am planning a trip to London, with my boyfriend.

‘I am’ is technically correct but in written and spoken English the contraction “I’m” would be used

We chose that city because we have two friends living there, Luke And Sara.

They are a couple and they met in Andorra eight years ago.

Using the contraction sounds much more natural

I have never been to Graineat Britain, and I’m very excited!

Great, not grain :)

Added contractions in

However, my boyfriend was in’s been to London twice. before

So, the idea is to go the first week of March, and be only in London forspend arboundt five days in London.

But I don't know if it is enough...

i think that there are a lot of things to do!!

but iI don't have more days of holidays.

Always a capital letter for ‘I’.

I was looking for activities to do, and some of them are the following: Big Ben, Buckingham Palace, British Museum, Tower of London, The Shard Viewpoint, and Warner Bros.

Studio (because I am a Harry Potter fan!) I hope it will be a beautiful trip.

Feedback

This is very good! I’ve made a few changes that make it sound more natural.

Native speakers would use the contraction for ‘I am’. And ‘I’ is always a capital letter when referring to yourself

Next Holidays


I am planning a trip to London, with my boyfriend.


I am planning a trip to London, with my boyfriend.

‘I am’ is technically correct but in written and spoken English the contraction “I’m” would be used

I am planning a trip to London, with my boyfriend.

We chose that city because we have two friends living there, Luke And Sara.


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They are a couple and they met in Andorra eight years ago.


They are a couple and they met in Andorra eight years ago.

Using the contraction sounds much more natural

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I have never been to Grain Britain, and i´m very excited!


I have never been to Graineat Britain, and I’m very excited!

Great, not grain :) Added contractions in

I have never been to Graineat Britain, and I'm very excited!

It's a good alternative name! ;)

However, my boyfriend was in London twice.


However, my boyfriend was in’s been to London twice. before

However, my boyfriend whas inbeen to London twice.

So, the idea is to go the first week of March, and be only in London for around five days.


So, the idea is to go the first week of March, and be only in London forspend arboundt five days in London.

So, the idea is to go the first week of March, and be only stay in London for around five days.

You can put 'only' before the verb: 'only stay' or at the end of the phrase: 'stay in London for around five days only.'

But I don't know if it is enough...


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i think that there are a lot of things to do!!


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but i don't have more days of holidays.


but iI don't have more days of holidays.

Always a capital letter for ‘I’.

but iI don't have any more days of holidaysf.

or 'but I don't have any more annual leave.' or 'but I don't have any more holiday days'

I was looking for activities to do, and some of them are the following: Big Ben, Buckingham Palace, British Museum, Tower of London, The Shard Viewpoint, and Warner Bros.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was looking for activities to do, and some of them are the following: Big Ben, Buckingham Palace, British Museum, Tower of London, The Shard Viewpoint, and Warner Bros.

Good options! :) Can I also suggest Madame Tussauds and the London Dungeons; also, some of these names need 'the' in front of them, i.e. 'The Tower of London' and 'The British Museum'.

Studio (because I am a Harry Potter fan!) I hope it will be a beautiful trip.


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