July 17, 2020
Michael Ryan, the WHO emergencies’ chief, said that corona virus may not vanish. He pointed out that risks concerned with the virus is still high at a national, community and global level. He said, “We are concerned about a possible vicious circle of deterioration of public sanitation and economy, when the governments ease the lockdown policies without the ability to detect new infections.”
世界保健機関(WHO)で緊急事態対応を統括するマイケル・ライアン氏は13日、新型コロナウイルスが消滅しない可能性があるという見方を示した。
ライアン氏は、新型コロナに絡むリスクは「国、地域、世界レベル」で依然高いと指摘。「新規感染を検出する能力を持たずにロックダウン措置を緩和すれば、公共衛生と経済破綻の悪循環に陥ると懸念している」と述べた。
Michael Ryan, the WHOchief of emergencies’ chief at the WHO, said that corona virus may not vanish.
He pointed out that risks concerned with the virus isare still high at a national, community, and global level.
The verb "is" is referring to "risks", which is plural. In this case, "are" is more appropriate.
Also, the Oxford comma is optional - depending on which English is used. I tend to lean more towards using it than not (American English speaker).
He said, “We are concerned about a possible vicious circle of deterioration of public sanitation and economy, when the governments ease the lockdown policies without the ability to detect new infections.”
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Michael Ryan, the WHO emergencies’ chief, said that corona virus may not vanish. Michael Ryan, |
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He pointed out that risks concerned with the virus is still high at a national, community and global level. He pointed out that risks concerned with the virus The verb "is" is referring to "risks", which is plural. In this case, "are" is more appropriate. Also, the Oxford comma is optional - depending on which English is used. I tend to lean more towards using it than not (American English speaker). |
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He said, “We are concerned about a possible vicious circle of deterioration of public sanitation and economy, when the governments ease the lockdown policies without the ability to detect new infections.” This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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