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JAVIER_MARTINEZ

Aug. 14, 2025

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NEWS OF MYSELF

Hi guys, I've not written anything for 3 days. After writing this, I'm going to correct some texts I saw before.
Well, I just want to say that I'm from Seville and the weather here is being horrible, it's boiling. I do not recommend you to visit this city in this season. Moreover, my air conditioner doesn't work, so my family and I are suffering a lot.
Every summer, we have the same problem, our air conditioner stops working. We always have it repaired by a mechanic however, the year after becomes useless again, it's anoying.

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NEWS OF MYSELFews From My Life

Titles follow special capitalization rules, but should not be entirely capitalized as done here.

Edited for more natural phrasing

Hi guys, I've not written anything for 3 days.

After writing this, I'm going to correct some texts I saw before.

Well, I just wanted to say that I'm from Seville, Spain, and the weather here is being horrible,; it's boiling hot.

Even though you were expressing a current feeling, we will almost always say "I wanted to say..." when immediately stating something.
It's good to include "Spain" because many of us are poor in geography.

I do not recommend that you to visit this city during this season.

MoreoverPlus/Also/What's more, my air conditioner doesn't work, so my family and I are suffering a lot.

"Moreover" is a fairly formal word that is basically unused outside of a professional setting (so it seems out of place in your text); I offered three more natural options

Every summer, we have the same problem,: our air conditioner stops working.

We always have it repaired by a mechanic h. However, by the year afternext year it becomes useless again, it's annoying.

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JAVIER_MARTINEZ

Aug. 15, 2025

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Thank you for your time

NEWS OF MYSELF

Hi guys, I've not written anything for 3 days.

After writing this, I'm going to correct some texts I saw before.

Well, I just want to say that I'm from Seville and the weather here is being horrible, i. It's boiling.

I think yours was fine but it's less natural.

I do not recommend you to visit this city in this season.

Moreover, my air conditioner doesn't work, so my family and I are suffering a lot.

Every summer, we have the same problem, our air conditioner stops working.

We always have it repaired by a mechanic; however, thenext year after, it becomes useless again, i. It's annoying.

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JAVIER_MARTINEZ

Aug. 15, 2025

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Thank you for your time

NEWS OF MYSELF


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NEWS OF MYSELFews From My Life

Titles follow special capitalization rules, but should not be entirely capitalized as done here. Edited for more natural phrasing

Hi guys, I've not written anything for 3 days.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After writing this, I'm going to correct some texts I saw before.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Well, I just want to say that I'm from Seville and the weather here is being horrible, it's boiling.


Well, I just want to say that I'm from Seville and the weather here is being horrible, i. It's boiling.

I think yours was fine but it's less natural.

Well, I just wanted to say that I'm from Seville, Spain, and the weather here is being horrible,; it's boiling hot.

Even though you were expressing a current feeling, we will almost always say "I wanted to say..." when immediately stating something. It's good to include "Spain" because many of us are poor in geography.

I do not recommend you to visit this city in this season.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I do not recommend that you to visit this city during this season.

Moreover, my air conditioner doesn't work, so my family and I are suffering a lot.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

MoreoverPlus/Also/What's more, my air conditioner doesn't work, so my family and I are suffering a lot.

"Moreover" is a fairly formal word that is basically unused outside of a professional setting (so it seems out of place in your text); I offered three more natural options

Every summer, we have the same problem, our air conditioner stops working.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Every summer, we have the same problem,: our air conditioner stops working.

We always have it repaired by a mechanic however, the year after becomes useless again, it's anoying.


We always have it repaired by a mechanic; however, thenext year after, it becomes useless again, i. It's annoying.

We always have it repaired by a mechanic h. However, by the year afternext year it becomes useless again, it's annoying.

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