Aug. 14, 2025
Hi guys, I've not written anything for 3 days. After writing this, I'm going to correct some texts I saw before.
Well, I just want to say that I'm from Seville and the weather here is being horrible, it's boiling. I do not recommend you to visit this city in this season. Moreover, my air conditioner doesn't work, so my family and I are suffering a lot.
Every summer, we have the same problem, our air conditioner stops working. We always have it repaired by a mechanic however, the year after becomes useless again, it's anoying.
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Titles follow special capitalization rules, but should not be entirely capitalized as done here.
Edited for more natural phrasing
Hi guys, I've not written anything for 3 days.
After writing this, I'm going to correct some texts I saw before.
Well, I just wanted to say that I'm from Seville, Spain, and the weather here is being horrible,; it's boiling hot.
Even though you were expressing a current feeling, we will almost always say "I wanted to say..." when immediately stating something.
It's good to include "Spain" because many of us are poor in geography.
I do not recommend that you to visit this city during this season.
MoreoverPlus/Also/What's more, my air conditioner doesn't work, so my family and I are suffering a lot.
"Moreover" is a fairly formal word that is basically unused outside of a professional setting (so it seems out of place in your text); I offered three more natural options
Every summer, we have the same problem,: our air conditioner stops working.
We always have it repaired by a mechanic h. However, by the year afternext year it becomes useless again, it's annoying.
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Hi guys, I've not written anything for 3 days.
After writing this, I'm going to correct some texts I saw before.
Well, I just want to say that I'm from Seville and the weather here is being horrible, i. It's boiling.
I think yours was fine but it's less natural.
I do not recommend you to visit this city in this season.
Moreover, my air conditioner doesn't work, so my family and I are suffering a lot.
Every summer, we have the same problem, our air conditioner stops working.
We always have it repaired by a mechanic; however, thenext year after, it becomes useless again, i. It's annoying.
NEWS OF MYSELF This sentence has been marked as perfect! N Titles follow special capitalization rules, but should not be entirely capitalized as done here. Edited for more natural phrasing |
Hi guys, I've not written anything for 3 days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
After writing this, I'm going to correct some texts I saw before. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Well, I just want to say that I'm from Seville and the weather here is being horrible, it's boiling. Well, I just want to say that I'm from Seville and the weather here is I think yours was fine but it's less natural. Well, I just wanted to say that I'm from Seville, Spain, and the weather here is Even though you were expressing a current feeling, we will almost always say "I wanted to say..." when immediately stating something. It's good to include "Spain" because many of us are poor in geography. |
I do not recommend you to visit this city in this season. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I do not recommend that you |
Moreover, my air conditioner doesn't work, so my family and I are suffering a lot. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
"Moreover" is a fairly formal word that is basically unused outside of a professional setting (so it seems out of place in your text); I offered three more natural options |
Every summer, we have the same problem, our air conditioner stops working. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Every summer, we have the same problem |
We always have it repaired by a mechanic however, the year after becomes useless again, it's anoying. We always have it repaired by a mechanic; however, We always have it repaired by a mechanic |
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