June 23, 2025
I read an article in English again.
This topic is less interesting but i would like to read in English.
The scientics are looking many tiny rocks and they are searching their age. The answer able to help to understand the earth.
It's because of the first astronaute went on moon, he bring this rocks, that the scientics can studie.
For them, is it very important.
I don't know what to write again, maybe it's more difficult about of this topic.
I don't have a idea.
J'ai lu un article en anglais encore.
Le sujet est moins intéressant mais je voulais tout de même lire en anglais.
Les scientifiques sont en train de regarder de minuscules rochers et ils sont en train de chercher son âge. La réponse pourra aider à comprendre la terre.
C'est parce que le premier astronaute parti sur la lune, a ramené ces rochers, que les scientifiques peuvent étudier.
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Je ne sais pas quoi écrire encore de plus.
Je n'ai plus d'inspiration.
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The sScienticsts are looking at many tiny rocks and they are searchrying to determinge their age.
The answer able tois information will help us to understand the earth.
It's because of the first astronaute went on moon, he bring this rocks, that the scientics can studieScientists study the rocks brought back by the first astronauts to land on the moon.
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I don't know what else to write again, maybe it's more difficult about of this topic. Perhaps that is because this topic is more difficult.
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You were able to get your ideas across clearly. Your word order was a bit awkward at times, but I was still able to understand what you were trying to say. Good job.
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In titles in English, we tend to uppercase all nouns, pronouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs, but not articles, prepositions, or conjunctions, unless the latter is 4 letters or longer. The latter rule depends on the style guide you are following, but the first rules should be followed in most cases.
I read an article in English again.
Thise topic is lessof the article is not very interesting, but i wouldI like to read in English.
You wouldn't use "this" since you haven't yet mentioned what the topic is. "Less" is for a comparison, which was not done here. You need a comma before "but" because the phrase that follows "but" is a full sentence. "Would" is ok here, but it is a bit more natural without it because you did in fact read the article already, so "would" makes it sound like something you haven't done that yet and are aspiring to do this instead.
The sScienticsts are lookanalyzing many tiny rocks, and they are searchdetermining their age.
You can't use "the" because you are not referring to scientists that you already mentioned. You could use "the" though if you specify which scientists you are referring to. I.e., "The scientists discussed in the article..." "Looking" would need to be followed by "at" in this context, but that verb is still not "strong" enough: Scientists analyze and evaluate, whereas "look (at)" is a more generic verb. "Search" has a similar issue here, which would be "searching for," when followed by a noun like this, but again, the verb is a not the best for the context since we are discussing the actions of scientists.
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"Data" is better. "Answer" is not as good because there was no "question." And you want to say "better understand" rather than just "understand" because there are still things we won't know about Earth once we have this data. "The earth" is OK, but "Earth" is more clear, since we know you are discussing the planet and not dirt.
It's because of the first astronaute went on moon, he bring this rocks, that the scientics can studieScientists are able to study these rocks because they were brought back by the first astronaut who went to the moon.
For them, is it very important.
These rocks are very important to the scientists.
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I read an article in English again.
This topic is less interesting, but iI would likeanted to read in English.
"Would like" est correct, mais si tu traduis "je voulais" dans cette phrase, on utiliserait plutôt le passé en anglais.
The scienticsts are looking at many tiny rocks and they are searchingtrying to determine their age.
On dit toujours "look at" quelque chose. De la même façon, quand on cherche quelque chose, on dit toujours "search for" quelque chose. Mais "search for" ne va pas très bien dans cette phrase.
The answer able to help tocould help us/them understand the earth.
It sounds a little vague when you just say "help to understand," and would probably sound better if you choose either "us" (help us, humans, understand the earth) or "them" (help scientists understand the earth)
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Si tu parles des rochers qui sont importants, on dirait "they" ici.
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I read an article in English again.
This topic is less interesting but iI would like to read in English.
The scienticsts are looking at many tiny rocks and they are searching for their age.
Also can say "The scientists are looking at many tiny rocks and they are trying to determine their age."
The answer able towill help to understand the eEarth.
It's because of the first astronaute went on moon, he bring this rocks, that the scientics can studieThe scientists can study these rocks because they were brought back by the first astronauts that went to the moon.
I don't know what else to write again,bout. It may be it's more difficultdifficult to write more about of this topic.
Do you mean you don't know what else to write? Or don't know what to write next time? "Write again" isn't clear. Apologies if I changed the meaning of what you wanted to say.
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This topic is less interesting but i would like to read in English. This topic is less interesting but This topic is less interesting, but "Would like" est correct, mais si tu traduis "je voulais" dans cette phrase, on utiliserait plutôt le passé en anglais. Th You wouldn't use "this" since you haven't yet mentioned what the topic is. "Less" is for a comparison, which was not done here. You need a comma before "but" because the phrase that follows "but" is a full sentence. "Would" is ok here, but it is a bit more natural without it because you did in fact read the article already, so "would" makes it sound like something you haven't done that yet and are aspiring to do this instead. This topic is less interesting, but I is always capitalized. |
The scientics are looking many tiny rocks and they are searching their age. The scienti Also can say "The scientists are looking at many tiny rocks and they are trying to determine their age." The scienti On dit toujours "look at" quelque chose. De la même façon, quand on cherche quelque chose, on dit toujours "search for" quelque chose. Mais "search for" ne va pas très bien dans cette phrase.
You can't use "the" because you are not referring to scientists that you already mentioned. You could use "the" though if you specify which scientists you are referring to. I.e., "The scientists discussed in the article..." "Looking" would need to be followed by "at" in this context, but that verb is still not "strong" enough: Scientists analyze and evaluate, whereas "look (at)" is a more generic verb. "Search" has a similar issue here, which would be "searching for," when followed by a noun like this, but again, the verb is a not the best for the context since we are discussing the actions of scientists.
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The answer able to help to understand the earth. The answer able The answer It sounds a little vague when you just say "help to understand," and would probably sound better if you choose either "us" (help us, humans, understand the earth) or "them" (help scientists understand the earth) The "Data" is better. "Answer" is not as good because there was no "question." And you want to say "better understand" rather than just "understand" because there are still things we won't know about Earth once we have this data. "The earth" is OK, but "Earth" is more clear, since we know you are discussing the planet and not dirt. Th |
It's because of the first astronaute went on moon, he bring this rocks, that the scientics can studie.
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For them, is it very important.
Si tu parles des rochers qui sont importants, on dirait "they" ici. For them, is it very important. These rocks are very important to the scientists.
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I don't know what to write again, maybe it's more difficult about of this topic. I don't know what else to write a Do you mean you don't know what else to write? Or don't know what to write next time? "Write again" isn't clear. Apologies if I changed the meaning of what you wanted to say. I don't know what else to write I don't know what more to write Another option: I don't know what else to write; maybe this is a more difficult topic. I don't know what else to write |
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