Feb. 5, 2023
Newcomer
I have relocated to B city from A city for 4 months now. I am excited and scared at the same time. Mostly I am worried about the language --- English. I am OK to hold a basic and short conversation. But when it comes to a longer conversation, regarding describing concepts, summarises key points. I find it difficult for me to express them in a logical and clear way. I definitely think writing more could improve my expression ability.
Newcomer
I have relocated to B city from A city four 4 months nowago.
I am excited and scared at the same time.
Mostly I am worried about the language --- English.
I am OK to holding a basic and short conversation.
But when it comes to a longer conversation, regarding describing concepts, summarises key points.
This is a sentence fragment so I deleted it and added it to the next line.
But when it comes to a longer conversation, which includes describing concepts and summarizing key points, I find it difficult for me to express them in a logical and clear way.
We all do at first. You'll get there with more practice.
I definitely think writing more could improve my expression abilityability to express myself.
Definitely!
Feedback
Writing is good but, the truth is, we still need to practice speaking to get better at speaking. A friend gave me this advice, "Speak as much as possible and think as little as possible," which I find very helpful. I hope you do, too.
Good work! Your English is very good.
Feb. 6, 2023
Much appreciated your kind words and suggestions. Marked down the advice!
Newcomer
I have relocated to B city B from A city A for 4 months now.
This means you will stay in city B for just four months and then move again. Is this what you mean? Or do you mean you relocated to city B four months ago?
Mostly I am worried about the language --- English.
I am OK to hold a basic and short conversation.
This is fine in casual speech.
But when it comes to a longer conversation, regarincluding describing concepts, or summariseszing key points., I find…
Merge this incomplete sentence with the next.
…I find it difficult (for me) to express them in a logical and clear way.
It will sound more natural if you delete “for me.”
Suggestion: But when it comes to a longer conversation, I find it difficult to describe concepts or summarize key points logically and clearly.
I definitely think writing more could improve my expression abilityability to express myself.
Feedback
Well done. Your errors are all minor, with the possible exception of “for four years” vs “four years ago.”
Newcomer
I have relocated to B cCity B from A cCity forA 4 months nowago.
* When using placeholders we tend to use the noun first (e.g. Food A vs Food B)
* We don't tend to use 'relocated' as a state
I am excited and scared at the same time.
Mostly I am worried about the language --- English.
I am OKgood enough to hold a basic and short conversation.
But when it comes to a longer conversation, regarding with describing concepts, and summarisesing key points.
This sentence isn't a complete idea - so it needs to be merged with the next one.
I find it difficult for me to express themmyself in a logical and clear way.
(note above comment - it should read: "But when it comes to a longer conversation with describing concepts and summarising key points, I find it difficult to express myself in a logical and clear way.)
I definitely think writing more could improve my expression abilityability to express myself.
Feedback
All these a just small changes to make it sound a bit more native. I think you're expressing yourself pretty clearly already :D
Feb. 5, 2023
WOW! Greatly appreciate all your feedback. The explanation is clear and detailed. I feel very blessed that my first post just received such kindness and encouragement from a stranger. XD
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I am OK to hold a basic and short conversation. I am I am OK to hold a basic and short conversation. This is fine in casual speech. I am OK |
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But when it comes to a longer conversation, regarding describing concepts, summarises key points. But when it comes to a longer conversation This sentence isn't a complete idea - so it needs to be merged with the next one. But when it comes to a longer conversation, Merge this incomplete sentence with the next.
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