Jan. 1, 2025
New Year's Resolutions for 2025
Happy New Year, everyone!
I want to tell you some of my New Year's resolutions for 2025.
Practicing my English listening and speaking is still one of them. My goal is to express myself confidently and fluently, with fewer mistakes. I tried to spend half an hour here and 15 minutes on Duolingo every day last year. Furthermore, I also participated in group chat lessons in Cambly for an hour every week.
All of these three will be continued in 2025, but I plan to focus on two directions when I post entries here because I found that some recurring topics made me feel bored and maybe you correctors feel the same way too. Thus, I'm going to write about something useful for correctors, especially the ones learning Chinese. This is one direction. The other one is continuously telling you about my hiking stories with my spoken English - I'm a little worried about this because I fear I might take up too much of your time or bore you. I'll try my best to make it not too boring.
My second resolution is about exercise. In 2024 my exercise goal was to conquer hypothyroidism. Then in 2025, I want to get my weight back to pre-COVID. Weight gain is a common symptom of an underactive thyroid. In the latter half of 2024, I managed to control my weight, but I still did not return to my pre-COVID state. I will try to run three times a week.
The third resolution I want to tell you is about reading. I usually used an app to listen to sound books. It was quite convenient, friendly to my eyes, and very quick, but I found that I got less from the books. I will try to make notes after finishing a book on the app. At the pace I'm going, I can take 24 reading notes in 2025.
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It's quite late now. That's all for today.
Have a great 2025!
大家新年快乐呀！
我想告诉你们我2025年的一些新年计划。
练习我的英语听力和口语仍然是其中之一。我的目标是自信流利地表达，更少犯错。去年我试着每天花半个小时在这里，15分钟在多邻国上。此外，我还参加了Cambly的群聊课，每周一个小时。
所有这三个都将在2025年继续，但我计划在这里发布文章时关注两个方向，因为我发现一些反复出现的话题让我感到无聊，也许你们这些帮我更正的小伙伴也有同样的感觉。因此，我要写一些对大家有用的东西，尤其是对学习中文的人。这是一个方向。另一个是继续用我的英语口语给你讲我的徒步故事——我有点担心，因为我怕我可能会占用你们太多时间或让人厌烦。我会尽我最大的努力使它不太无聊。
我的第二个决心是关于锻炼的。2024年我的运动目标是战胜甲减。然后在2025年，我想把体重恢复到covid之前的水平。体重增加是甲状腺功能减弱的常见症状。在2024年下半年，我成功地控制了体重，但还没有回到covid前的状态。我会尽量一周跑三次。
我想告诉你们的第三个是关于阅读的。我通常用一个app来听有声书。这很方便，对我的眼睛很友好，而且很快，但我发现我从书中得到的少了。我将尝试在app上完成一本书后做笔记。按照我现在的速度，2025年我可以做24个阅读笔记。
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现在已经很晚了。今天就到这里。
祝我们都有丰收如意的2025！
New Year's Resolutions for 2025
Happy New Year, everyone!
I want to tell you some of my New Year's resolutions for 2025.
All of these threeings I listed will be continued in 2025, but I plan to focus on two directions when I post entries here because I found that some recurring topics made me feel bored and maybe you correctors feel the same way too.
This sentence is grammatically correct but I suggest changing it slightly for redundancy. "You correctors" is somewhat informal as well.
This is one direction.
I'm not entirely sure if direction is the word you want to be using.
ThenSo now in 2025, I want to get my weight back to pre-COVID.
Just a small tip.
The third resolution I want to tell you is about is reading.
Switch the order of about and is.
I usually used an app to listen to soundaudio books.
I would use audio books instead.
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This piece was very good and read like a native speaker. There were very few problems that were all very minor. Excellent work.
Jan. 2, 2025
Thanks a lot!
Have a nice day!
New Year's Resolutions for 2025
Happy New Year, everyone!
I want to tell you some of my New Year's resolutions for 2025.
Practicing my English listening and speaking skills is still one of them.
My goal is to express myself confidently and fluently, with fewer mistakes.
I tried to spend half an hour here and 15 minutes on Duolingo every day last year.
Furthermore, I also participated in group chat lessons in Cambly for an hour every week.
All of these three will be continued in 2025, but I plan to focus on two directionaspects when I post entries here because I found that some recurring topics made me feel bored and maybe you correctors feel the same way too.
Thus, I'm going to write about something useful for correctors, especially the ones learning Chinese.
This is one directionaspect.
The other one is continuously telling you about my hiking stories with my spoken English - I'm a little worried about this because I fear I might take up too much of your time or bore you.
I'll try my best to make it not too boring.
My second resolution is about exercise.
In 2024 my exercise goal was to conquer hypothyroidism.
Then in 2025, I want to get my weight back to pmy weight before- COVID.
pre-COVID is correct but it doesn't sound natural with my correction.
Weight gain is a common symptom of an underactive thyroid.
In the latter half of 2024, I managed to control my weight, but I still did not return to my pre-COVID state.
I will try to run three times a week.
The third resolution I want to tell you is about is reading.
I usually used an app to listen to soundaudio books.
They are called audio books.
It was quite convenient, friendly to my eyes, and veryI finished a book quickly, but I found that I got less from the books.
I will try to make notes after finishing a book on the app.
At the pace I'm going, I can take 24 reading notes in 2025.
......
It's quite late now.
That's all for today.
Have a great 2025!
Feedback
Best of luck in completing your resolutions.
Happy New Year, everyone!
I want to tell you some of my New Year's resolutions for 2025.
PLike last year, I want to practicinge my English listening and speaking is still one of them.
I think your previous sentence was fine as it was grammatically but using “still” implies some sort of continuity so I reworded slightly to make it seem more natural.
My goal is to express myself confidently and fluently, with fewer mistakes.
I tried to spend half an hour here and 15 minutes on Duolingo every day last year.
Furthermore, I also participated in group chat lessons ion Cambly for an hour every week.
AI’ll of these three will be continuedcontinue to do these things in 2025, but I plan to focus on two directionaspects when I post entries here because I found that some recurring topics made me feel bored and maybe you correctors feel the same way too.
You could also say “two things” but I wanted to avoid repetition.
Thus, I'm going to write about something useful for correctors, especially the ones learning Chinese.
This is one directiof the things I’m going to focus on.
The other one is continuously telling you about my hiking stories with my spoken English - I'm a little worried about this because I fear’m scared I might take up too much of your time or bore you.
“I fear” sounds a little too formal but it’s fine grammatically.
I'll try my best not to make it not too boring.
My second resolution is about exercise.
In 2024, my exercise goal was to conquer hypothyroidism.
ThenSo in 2025, I want to get my weight back to pre-COVID levels.
Weight gain is a common symptom of an underactive thyroid.
In the latter half of 2024, I managed to control my weight, but I still did not return to my pre-COVID state.
I will try to run three times a week.
The third resolution I want to tell you is about reading.
I usually used an app to listen to soundlisten to books.
It was quite convenient, friendly to my eyes, and very quick, but I found that I got lesslearned less than I hoped from the books.
I will try to make notes after finishing a book on the app.
At the pace I'm going, I can take 24 reading noteread 24 books in 2025.
I think it’s implied that you’re going to take notes in the previous sentence so this sounds more natural to me.
It's quite late now.
That's all for today.
Have a great 2025!
Jan. 2, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
Happy New Year, everyone!
I want to tell you some of my New Year's resolutions for 2025.
Practicing my English listening and speaking is still one of them.
My goal is to express myself confidently and fluently, with fewer mistakes.
the preposition "with" does not need a comma here.
I tried to spend half an hour here, and 15spend fifteen minutes on Duolingo every day last year.
split the sentence with a comma before "and" to separate the clauses in the sentence. For consistency, it is better to write "half an hour" and "fifteen minutes" OR "30 minutes" and "15 minutes".
Furthermore, I also participated in group chat lessons in Cambly for an hour every week.
All of these three will be continued in 2025, but I plan to focus on two directions when I post entries here because I found that some recurring topics made me feel bored and maybe you correctors feel the same way too.
Thus, I'm going to write about something useful for correctors, especially the ones learning Chinese.
This is one direction.
The other one is continuously telling you about my hiking stories with my spoken English -. I'm a little worried about this because I fear I might take up too much of your time or bore you.
The en dash(-) is not needed to connect entire sentences
I'll try my best to make it not too boring.
My second resolution is about exercise.
In 2024 my exercise goal was to conquer hypothyroidism.
Then in 2025, I want to get my weight back to where it was pre-COVID.
Weight gain is a common symptom of an underactive thyroid.
In the latter half of 2024, I managed to control my weight, but I still did not return to my pre-COVID state.
I will try to run three times a week.
The third resolution I want to tell you is about reading.
I usually used an app to listen to sound audiobooks.
It was quite convenient, friendly to my eyes, and very quick, but I found that I got less from the books.
I will try to make notes after finishing a book on the app.
At the pace I'm going, I can take 24 reading notes in 2025.
......
It's quite late now.
That's all for today.
Have a great 2025!
Feedback
Very Good! There are only minor punctuation mistakes.
Jan. 2, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
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