Jan. 1, 2024
The first day of 2024, time to make my resolutions. Let me look back for a while.
All my apps are sending me Yearly Report these days, telling me what I have done and achieved in 2023. Yeah, smart phone has been an important part in my life. People say we are used to switching our eyes from one screen to another nowadays. I have an laptop, an smart phone and an ipad. Obviously smart phone occupies most of my attention. As for TV, that's something for my parents to kill time, not for me.
Exercise: I bought a spinning bike and a treadmill recent years. I also have a yoga mat. I didn't succeed in losing enough weight, but I will keep working on it.
Reading: I read for 197 hours last year on weread app.
Housework: I started to be interested in tidying my room. I got a app for this. When I take photos for my things and record them on this app, I don't feel like buying too many things.
Hobby: I like playing guzheng, a Chinese music instrument. I met a woman whose daughter need to learn English and she can teach me guzheng in return.
Work: I feel I didn't improve much in my job in 2023. Hope I can do better in 2024.
Plan for 2024
1 Use a time management app to record daily activities.
2 Play guzheng for at least 3 hours a week.
3 Sleep less and get up earlier.
4 Exercise everyday for at least 15 minutes.
5 Read on weread app one hour every day and win the 365 days challenge.
6 Get a hair cut once a year, dye and perm twice a year with fixed hairdresser.
7 Write weekly plan on Monday morning.
8 Do housework at least once a week.
9 Work harder, like a slave, understand the difference between me and the boss's relative co-workers.
All my apps are sending me Yearly Reports these days, telling me what I have done and achieved in 2023.
Yeah, my smart phone has been an important part in my life.
Or “yeah, smart phones have been…”
I have an laptop, an smart phone, and an ipad.
Obviously, my smart phone occupies most of my attention.
Exercise: I bought a spinning bike and a treadmill in recent years.
I also got an app for this.
When I take photos for my things and record them on this app, I don't feel like buying too many things.
I met a woman whose daughter newanted to learn English and she can teachtaught me guzheng in return.
6 Get a hair cut once a year, dye and perm twice a year with a fixed hairdresser.
9 Work harder, like a slave, and have a better understanding of the difference between me and thesome of my co-workers, who happen to be my boss's relative co-workers.
Feedback
Very well written. Good work!
New year's resolutions for 2024
TIt's the first day of 2024, so it's time to make my resolutions.
Let me look back for a while.
All my apps are sending me Yyearly Rreports these days, telling me what I have done and achieved in 2023.
Yeah, a smart phone has been an important part inof my life.
People say we are used to switching our eyes from one screen to another nowadays.
I have an laptop, an smart phone and an ipad.
Obviously the smart phone occupies most of my attention.
As for TV, that's something for my parents to kill time, not for me.
Exercise: I bought a spinning bike and a treadmill in recent years.
I also have a yoga mat.
I didn't succeed in losing enough weight, but I will keep working on it.
Reading: I read for 197 hours last year on the weread app.
Housework: I started to be interested in tidying up my room.
I got an app for this.
When I take photos for my things and record them on this app, I don't feel like buying too many things.
Hobby: I like playing guzheng, a Chinese music instrument.
I met a woman whose daughter needs to learn English and she can teach me guzheng in return.
Work: I feel I didn't improve much in my job in 2023.
I Hope I can do better in 2024.
Plan for 2024 1 Use a time management app to record daily activities.
2 Play guzheng for at least 3 hours a week.
3 Sleep less and get up earlier.
4 Exercise everyday for at least 15 minutes.
5 Read on the weread app one hour every day and win the 365 days challenge.
6 Get a hair cut once a year, dye and perm twice a year with fixed hairdresser.
7 Write weekly plan on Monday morning.
8 Do housework at least once a week.
9 Work harder, like a slave, and understand the difference between me and the boss's relative co-workers.
Feedback
Good job and good luck! Happy New Year!
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