today
New Year's Day Shopping
Yesterday, my family and I went to a humongous outlet shopping mall in the suburbs. It was extremely crowded. There wasn't even a parking spot, and we queued for ages to park. We popped into several shops, and found the stuff there wasn't cheap. Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was the New Year's Day.
Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was the New Year's Day.
Feedback
Nice job!
today
Thanks
New Year's Days Shopping
Yesterday, my family and I went to a humongous outlet shopping mall in the suburbs.
It was extremely crowded.
There wasn't even a parking spot, and we queued for ages to park.
We popped intovisited several shops, and found that the stuff there wasn't cheap.
Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just becaussince it was the New Year's Days.
today
Thanks
New Year's Day Shopping
Yesterday, my family and I went to a humongous outlet shopping mall outlet in the suburbs.
It was extremely crowded.
There wasn't even a parking spot, and we queuwaited for ages to park.
Queued is good vocab, but pretty unnatural here
We popped into several shops, and found the stuff there wasn't cheap.
Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was the New Year's Day.
|
New Year's Day Shopping This sentence has been marked as perfect! New Year |
|
Yesterday, my family and I went to a humongous outlet shopping mall in the suburbs. Yesterday, my family and I went to a humongous This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
It was extremely crowded. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
There wasn't even a parking spot, and we queued for ages to park. There wasn't even a parking spot, and we Queued is good vocab, but pretty unnatural here This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
We popped into several shops, and found the stuff there wasn't cheap. This sentence has been marked as perfect! We |
|
Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was the New Year's Day. Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium