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kyoko

Jan. 8, 2020

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New Year’s Card

Do you know about New Year’s cards in Japan?
It’s one of the traditional Japanese greetings.
We write postcards showing appreciation for the past year, and for wishing health and happiness for others and their families.
Though many people text on New Year’s Day instead of sending postcards these days, I like this beautiful tradition.
I guess Christmas cards and New Year’s cards are similar.

I sent over 50 New Year’s cards last year.
I can text all of my friends, but I want to cherish this handwritten communication.


(Corrected on Jan. 9th)


あなたは日本の年賀状を知っていますか。それは、日本の伝統的な挨拶の一つです。私たちは昨年の感謝と、その人や家族の健康と幸せを祈り、葉書に書きます。最近では多くの人が年賀状を送る代わりに元日にメールをしますが、私はこの美しい伝統が好きです。クリスマスカードと年賀状は似ているのではないかな、と思います。
私は去年の終わりに50枚以上の年賀状を送りました。私は友達みんなにメールを送ることもできますが、この手書きのコミュニケーションを大切にしたいと思っています。

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We write post cards aboutshowing appreciation for the past year, and wishing thefor healthy and happy for personiness for the recipients and their families who get the cards.

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kyoko

Jan. 8, 2020

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Thank you for the correction!

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We write post cards aboutshowing appreciation for the past year, and for wishing the healthy and happy for personiness for others and their families who get the cards.

Though many people text on New Year’s Day instead of posting cards these daysending postcards, I like this hbeartyutiful tradition.

I guess Christmas cards and New Year’s cards are similar.

I put over 50 of New Year’s cards in the post at the end of last year.

I sent over 50 New Year's cards last year.

I can text all of my friends, but I want to cherish this handwritten communicatradition.

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kyoko

Jan. 8, 2020

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Thank you for the correction!

Do you know about New Year's cards in Japan?

It’s one of Japanese's traditional greetings.

We write post cards about what we've appreciationed about the past year, and wishing the healthy and happy for personsople and their families who get the cards.

Though many people text on New Year’s Day instead of posting cards these days, I like this heartlovely tradition.

'Hearty' is usually used to describe soup :)

I guess Christmas cards and New Year’s cards are similar.

I pusent over 50 of New Year’s cards in the post at the end of last year.

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This sounds like a beautiful tradition

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kyoko

Jan. 8, 2020

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Thank you for the correction and such a nice comment!🙏🏻

Do you know about New Year’s cards in Japan?

It’s one of Japanesthe traditional Japanese greetings.

We write post cards about, appreciationg the past year, and wishing the healthy and happyiness for personsople and their families who get the cards.

Though many people text on New Year’s Day instead of posting cards these days, I like this hearty tradition.

I guess Christmas cards and New Year’s cards are similar.

I put over 50 of New Year’s cards in the post at the end of last year.

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kyoko

Jan. 9, 2020

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Thank you for the correction!
I’m really happy to be corrected them in British way😊
I’d like to learn both of American and British English! :)

New Year’s Card


Do you know New Year’s card in Japan?


Do you know about New Year’s cards in Japan?

Do you know about New Year's cards in Japan?

It’s one of Japanese traditional greetings.


It’s one of Japanesthe traditional Japanese greetings.

It’s one of Japanese's traditional greetings.

We write post cards about appreciation the past year, and wishing the healthy and happy for persons and their families who get the cards.


We write post cards about, appreciationg the past year, and wishing the healthy and happyiness for personsople and their families who get the cards.

We write post cards about what we've appreciationed about the past year, and wishing the healthy and happy for personsople and their families who get the cards.

We write post cards aboutshowing appreciation for the past year, and for wishing the healthy and happy for personiness for others and their families who get the cards.

We write post cards aboutshowing appreciation for the past year, and wishing thefor healthy and happy for personiness for the recipients and their families who get the cards.

Though many people text on New Year’s Day instead of posting cards these days, I like this hearty tradition.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Though many people text on New Year’s Day instead of posting cards these days, I like this heartlovely tradition.

'Hearty' is usually used to describe soup :)

Though many people text on New Year’s Day instead of posting cards these daysending postcards, I like this hbeartyutiful tradition.

I guess Christmas card and New Year’s card are similar.


I guess Christmas cards and New Year’s cards are similar.

I guess Christmas cards and New Year’s cards are similar.

I guess Christmas cards and New Year’s cards are similar.

I put over 50 of New Year’s cards in the post at the end of last year.


I put over 50 of New Year’s cards in the post at the end of last year.

I pusent over 50 of New Year’s cards in the post at the end of last year.

I put over 50 of New Year’s cards in the post at the end of last year.

I sent over 50 New Year's cards last year.

I can text all of my friends, but I want to cherish this handwritten communication.


I can text all of my friends, but I want to cherish this handwritten communicatradition.

Do you know about New Year’s cards in Japan?


It’s one of the traditional Japanese greetings.


We write postcards showing appreciation for the past year, and for wishing health and happiness for others and their families.


Though many people text on New Year’s Day instead of sending postcards these days, I like this beautiful tradition.


I guess Christmas cards and New Year’s cards are similar.


I sent over 50 New Year’s cards last year.


(Corrected 9th, Jan)


(Corrected on Jan. 9th)


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