Jan. 8, 2021
This week has been hard for the amount of activities I've been doing, I never thought of this new year will begin in this way. (And for me, it's also funny). It can be a good sign about what will happen this year.
But it's a new year and the most people make their goals to face their new activies and main goals for the present year.
For my part, I keep working in many of my main intermediate-term goals in this year.
As one of them is to learn English, I'm going to begin reading graded reader's books according to my level, I was trying to read the novel series of divergent but it's a little overwhelming to read them in my level. I can do it, but I don't enjoy too much stopping my reading to consult the dictionary for difficult words and difficult structures. I'm going to get used to them little by little.
I'm also going to try to post here two times per week my reviews of the books I'll read.
I wish a Happy New Year to all! :).
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I'm also going to try to post my book reviews over here twice a week.
I wishWishing you all a Happy New Year to all!
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Reading in a foreign language is tough :( b this is an awesome goal to set! Keep up the good work!
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New year, the same goals (maybe not all). New year, the same goals (maybe not all). This would be acceptable for chatting online, but it's not a proper title |
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This week has been hard for the amount of activities I've been doing, I never thought of this new year will begin in this way. |
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(And for me, it's also funny). |
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It can be a good sign about what will happen this year. |
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But it's a new year and the most people make their goals to face their new activies and main goals for the present year. |
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For my part, I keep working in many of my main intermediate-term goals for this year. |
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As one of them is to learn English, I'm going to begin reading graded reader's books according to my level, I was trying to read the novel series of divergent but it's a little overwhelming to read them in my level. |
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I can do it, but I don't enjoy too much stopping my reading to consult the dictionary for difficult words and difficult structures. |
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I'm going to get used to them little by little. |
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I'm also going to try to post here two times per week my reviews of the books I'll read. |
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I wish a Happy New Year for all! |
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For my part, I keep working in many of my main intermediate-term goals in this year. |
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I wish a Happy New Year to all! |
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This week has been hard for the amount of activities I've been doing, I never thought of this new year will begin in this way. This week has been hard "This week has been hard for [me]." I'm expecting a person after "for". This week has been |
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But it's a new year and the most people make their goals to face their new activies and main goals for the present year. But it's a new year and "and main goals for the present year" I don't know what this means in this context. We've already said "it's a new year" so we don't need to repeat that with "present year".
Starting the sentence with 'but' doesn't make sense here because you are contrasting or contradicting the previous sentence. Simply start without it :) Not sure what you mean by "main goals for the present year" |
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As one of them is to learn English, I'm going to begin reading graded reader's books according to my level, I was trying to read the novel series of divergent but it's a little overwhelming to read them in my level. As one of them is to learn English, I'm going to begin reading graded Or just "graded readers".
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I can do it, but I don't enjoy too much stopping my reading to consult the dictionary for difficult words and difficult structures. I can do it, but I don't enjoy I can |
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