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Jan. 2, 2021

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New year, New Challenge

Every new year is a challenge, we usually start making a strategic meeting and choosing what will be the main goal of the year. It's not easy at all, even more this 2021. By nature, business is a changing environment that compel you to go ahead in every step you make, but this year is diferent: we are blind.

To develop a good strategy you need to analyze the market environment, your competence and your skills and capabilities. Today I'm unable to think in any of those categories. I don't have data, experience or even hope to think that I can predict anything.

This year will be the biggest challenge in my career. I will lead a business completely blind.

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Everyach new year is a, we face a new challenge, w. We usually start makingchedule a strategic meeting andto choosing what will be the main goal ofor the year.

It's not easy at all, was never easy, but even more thisso for 2021.

By naturedefinition, business is an ever changing environment that compels you to goplan ahead in every step you makefor the unexpected, but this year iswill be different: we are blin, because we have all been blindsided.

To develop a good strategy, you need to analyze the market environment, your competence and your skills and capabilities.

although this sentence is grammatically correct, I feel you are using words with similar meanings. What is the big difference between competence, skills and capabilities? To me, they all represent your ability to perform a job.

Today I'm unable to think in any of thoese categorieterms.

I don't have the data, the experience or even the hope to think that I can predict anything.

This year will be the biggest challenge in my career.

I will be leading a business completely blind.in the dark.

Every new year is a challenge, w. We usually start makby holding a strategic meeting and choosing what will be the main goal of the year.

Alternatively, "Every year is a challenge: we usually start [...]"
You can "hold a meeting", or "arrange" or "call"

It's not easy at all, even more thisless so this year/ in 2021.

It's becoming "less easy", not "more not easy"

By nature, business is a changing environment that compels you to go ahead in every step you make, but this year is different: we are blind.

Also, you could say "push ahead"

To develop a good strategy you need to analyze the market environment, your competence and your skills and capabilities.

Today I'm unable to think in any of those categories.ontexts

"unable to think like that" might read better.

This year will be the biggest challenge in my career.

I will lead a business completely blind.

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This is a brilliant piece of writing! You've really effectively expressed the pessimism and anxiety you feel towards 2021. It's very effective and somber.

New yYear, New Challenge

Or, ¨New year, new challenge¨

Every new year is a challenge, we usually start makby having a strategic meeting and choosdeciding what will be the main goal of the year.

This is grammatically correct, but the context is missing. You start what by having a strategic meeting? I assume work? Better would be - "...we usually start off the year in my organization by having...¨

Also, very specific and not so important, but I changed ´choosing´ to ´deciding´ because of your use of ´what´ afterwards. You could alternatively write ´...and choosing the main goal of the year.´

It's not easy at all, and even more thisless so for 2021.

By nature, business is a changing environment that compels you to go ahead in every step you make, but this year is diferent: we are blind.

To develop a good strategy you need to analyze the market environment, your competence and your skills and capabilities.

Today I'm unable to think in any of those categories.

I don't have the data, experience or even hope to think that I can predict anything.

This year will be the biggest challenge inof my career.

I will lead a business completely blind.

Feedback

It´s a good piece, you really convey well the fear you´re facing within the short text. Grammatically it was fine, just very specific little fixes. I hope in the end it all turns out alright :( best of luck

New year, New Challenge


New yYear, New Challenge

Or, ¨New year, new challenge¨

Every new year is a challenge, we usually start making a strategic meeting and choosing what will be the main goal of the year.


Every new year is a challenge, we usually start makby having a strategic meeting and choosdeciding what will be the main goal of the year.

This is grammatically correct, but the context is missing. You start what by having a strategic meeting? I assume work? Better would be - "...we usually start off the year in my organization by having...¨ Also, very specific and not so important, but I changed ´choosing´ to ´deciding´ because of your use of ´what´ afterwards. You could alternatively write ´...and choosing the main goal of the year.´

Every new year is a challenge, w. We usually start makby holding a strategic meeting and choosing what will be the main goal of the year.

Alternatively, "Every year is a challenge: we usually start [...]" You can "hold a meeting", or "arrange" or "call"

Everyach new year is a, we face a new challenge, w. We usually start makingchedule a strategic meeting andto choosing what will be the main goal ofor the year.

It's not easy at all, even more this 2021.


It's not easy at all, and even more thisless so for 2021.

It's not easy at all, even more thisless so this year/ in 2021.

It's becoming "less easy", not "more not easy"

It's not easy at all, was never easy, but even more thisso for 2021.

By nature, business is a changing environment that compel you to go ahead in every step you make, but this year is diferent: we are blind.


By nature, business is a changing environment that compels you to go ahead in every step you make, but this year is diferent: we are blind.

By nature, business is a changing environment that compels you to go ahead in every step you make, but this year is different: we are blind.

Also, you could say "push ahead"

By naturedefinition, business is an ever changing environment that compels you to goplan ahead in every step you makefor the unexpected, but this year iswill be different: we are blin, because we have all been blindsided.

I don't have data, experience or even hope to think that I can predict anything.


I don't have the data, experience or even hope to think that I can predict anything.

I don't have the data, the experience or even the hope to think that I can predict anything.

This year will be the biggest challenge in my career.


This year will be the biggest challenge inof my career.

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I will lead a business completely blind.


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I will be leading a business completely blind.in the dark.

To develop a good strategy you need to analyze the market environment, your competence and your skills and capabilities.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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To develop a good strategy, you need to analyze the market environment, your competence and your skills and capabilities.

although this sentence is grammatically correct, I feel you are using words with similar meanings. What is the big difference between competence, skills and capabilities? To me, they all represent your ability to perform a job.

Today I'm unable to think in any of those categories.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I'm unable to think in any of those categories.ontexts

"unable to think like that" might read better.

Today I'm unable to think in any of thoese categorieterms.

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