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alexwong2164

Feb. 11, 2022

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New working schedule

Last year when the second wave attack our company has a new policy.

I call that 4-1-3.

Work 4 days, rest 1 day the next 3 days we stay at home and just waiting.

So, for lucky person he/she may work 4 days and rest 4 days.

Otherwise, may work 4 days rest 1 day and work another 3 days.

This year the fifth attack happened one month by now.

This policy is been modified.

Work 4 days and formally rest 4 days.

In that 4 working days we need to work extra hours to balance the total working hour.

Some colleagues like the previous version, some like the new policy.

What do you think?

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New working schedule

Last year when the second wave attackhit our company hasmade a new policy.

I call that 4-1-3.

Work 4 days, rest 1 day and the next 3 days we stay at home and just waiting.

So, for a lucky person he/sthey may work 4 days and rest 4 days.

“he/she” is correct but ”they” is less awkward.

Otherwise, they may work 4 days, rest 1 day, and then work another 3 days.

This year the fifth attackwave happened one month by nowago.

This policy is been modified.

Work 4 days and formally rest 4 days.

In that 4 working days we need to work extra hours to balance the total working hours.

Some colleagues like the previous version, some like the new policy.

What do you think?

Feedback

Hmm, I get very tired at the end of the work day so I don’t think I would like being forced to work longer hours.

New working schedule

Last year when the second wave attackof COVID-19 hit, our company hasmade a new policy.

I call thait 4-1-3.

Work 4 days, rest 1 day, and the next 3 days we stay at home and just waiting.

So, for lucky person he/she maysomeone lucky they might work 4 days and rest 4 days.

using "they" is more common than using "he or she" nowadays

Otherwise, mayyou might work 4 days, rest 1 day, and work another 3 days.

This year the fifth attackwave happened one month by nowago.

This policy ihas been modified.

In thatose 4 working days, we need to work extra hours to balance the total number of working hours.

Some colleagues like the previous version, some like the new policy.

What do you think?

Feedback

You did a good job writing this. I think I would prefer working 4 days and then having 4 days off! That sounds like it would be nice.

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alexwong2164

Feb. 11, 2022

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me too

New working schedule


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Last year when the second wave attack our company has a new policy.


Last year when the second wave attackof COVID-19 hit, our company hasmade a new policy.

Last year when the second wave attackhit our company hasmade a new policy.

I call that 4-1-3.


I call thait 4-1-3.

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Work 4 days, rest 1 day the next 3 days we stay at home and just waiting.


Work 4 days, rest 1 day, and the next 3 days we stay at home and just waiting.

Work 4 days, rest 1 day and the next 3 days we stay at home and just waiting.

So, for lucky person he/she may work 4 days and rest 4 days.


So, for lucky person he/she maysomeone lucky they might work 4 days and rest 4 days.

using "they" is more common than using "he or she" nowadays

So, for a lucky person he/sthey may work 4 days and rest 4 days.

“he/she” is correct but ”they” is less awkward.

Otherwise, may work 4 days rest 1 day and work another 3 days.


Otherwise, mayyou might work 4 days, rest 1 day, and work another 3 days.

Otherwise, they may work 4 days, rest 1 day, and then work another 3 days.

This year the fifth attack happened one month by now.


This year the fifth attackwave happened one month by nowago.

This year the fifth attackwave happened one month by nowago.

This policy is been modified.


This policy ihas been modified.

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Work 4 days and formally rest 4 days.


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In that 4 working days we need to work extra hours to balance the total working hour.


In thatose 4 working days, we need to work extra hours to balance the total number of working hours.

In that 4 working days we need to work extra hours to balance the total working hours.

Some colleagues like the previous version, some like the new policy.


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What do you think?


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