April 20, 2023
New start of my career
I quit my job in March 29 2023, I don't want to work in that company ant that occupy,because I need holiday to stay with my family and need time to find out my soul mate.
我上个月辞职了，我不想继续在之前的公司工作以及那个行业工作，因为我需要假期去陪伴我的家人，需要时间去找到我的伴侣。
I quit my job ion March 29 2023, I don't want to work in that company antd that occupy,ation, because I need a holiday to stay with my family and need time to find out my soul mate.
This makes it flow more naturally and I corrected some grammar.
A New sStart of mto My cCareer
This sounds more natural in the US. We also capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.
I quit my job ion March 29, 2023,. I don't want to work infor that company antin that occupy,capacity because I need a holiday to stay with my family and needthe time to find out my soul mate.
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New start of my career A New This sounds more natural in the US. We also capitalize the first letter of important words in titles. |
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I quit my job in March 29 2023, I don't want to work in that company ant that occupy,because I need holiday to stay with my family and need time to find out my soul mate. I quit my job I quit my job This makes it flow more naturally and I corrected some grammar. |
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