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Secchan

April 1, 2024

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New shool from today

Finally, it start first day of April. I transfer to a new school from today. Now I have still missed the rest of my class students a little. A second grade of boy gave me a cute small flower bouquet. Someone gave me a rose for bubble bath, handkerchief, canned cookies, water bottle etc.

It's a bit bittersweet to leave present school. But I should change my mind. New shool students are waiting me. I'll do my best!


とうとう4月。今日から新しい学校へ移動だ。今はまだ前の学校の生徒が懐かしい。2年生の男子は可愛い花のブーケをくれたし、他にも、バラの入浴剤やハンカチ、クッキー缶や水筒をもらった。

今の学校を去るのは、少しほろ苦い思いです。でも気持ちを切り替えないとね。新しい学校の生徒達が待ってるから、頑張ろう!

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New shool from today

Finally, it start first day of April.

I have transferred to a new school starting from today.

Now, I have still missed the rest of my class's students a little.

A second grade of boy gave me a cute small and cute flower bouquet.

Someone gave me a rose for bubble bath, handkerchief, canned cookies, water bottle etc.

It's a bit bittersweet to leave my present school.

But I should change my mind.

New shool students are waiting me.

I'll do my best!

New school starting (from) today

"from" is optional

Finally, it startthe first day of April has started.

I transfer to a new school from today.

Now, I have still missed the rest of my class studentmates a little.

A second grade ofophomore boy gave me a cute small flower bouquet.

The "second grade" usually refers to primary school, while "sophomore" refers to the second grade of any school. Where I'm from, though, if it's the second grade of high school, then we much more commonly say "ninth grade." It depends on the school system of the area.

Someone gave me a rose petals for a bubble bath, a handkerchief, canned cookies, a water bottle etc.

It's a bit bittersweet to leave my present school.

But I should change my mindset.

New shool studentclassmates are waiting me.

I'll do my best!

Feedback

Congrats and good luck!

New sSchool fFrom tToday On.

Finally, it startthe first day of April. has arrived.

I transfer to a new school from today on.

From today on is a short form of "From today onward" which basically means 今日から

Now I have still missed the rest of my class students a little.feel almost nostalgic for the friends I've made along the way at my soon to be previous school.

A sSecond grade ofyear High school boy gave me a cute small flower bouquet.

"Second Grade" は小学校の学生感じ。

Someonand then someone else gave me a rose for bubble bath, handkerchief, canned cookies, water bottle , among other cute presentsetc.

It's a bit bittersweet, having to leave presentthis school.

But I shouldcan't change my mind.

New shool studentskids at a new school are waiting me.!

I'll do my best!

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New school fromstarting today

Finally, it startwas the first day of April.

I transferred to a new school from today.

Now I haveI still missed the rest of my classformer students a little.

A second grade of boy gave me a cute small flower bouquet.

or "A boy from second grade"

Someone gave me a rose for bubble baths, handkerchief, canned cookies, water bottle etc.

It's a bit bittersweet to leave presentthis school.

But I should change my mind.look on the bright side

The sentence is grammatically correct but a bit unnatural

New shool students are waiting me.

I'll do my best!

Feedback

Good luck!

New school fromstarting today

more natural

Finally, it startIt's finally the first day of April.

"The first day of April has finally arrived." is another way you could say this.

I transfer to a new school from today.

OR Starting today, I'm transferring to a new school.

Now I haveI still missed the rest of my class studentstudents of my former class a little.

A second grade of boy gave me a cute small flower bouquet.

SomeoneOthers gave me a roses for a bubble bath, a handkerchief, canned cookies, and a water bottle, etc.

It's a bit bittersweet to leave my present school.

But I should change my mind.attitude.

fits a little better with what you're trying to express

New shool studentsThe students at my new school are waiting me.

Feedback

Good luck at your new school!

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Secchan

April 1, 2024

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Thank you so much!

New school from today

In Japanese, it's normal to say 今日から/"from today", but in English I think it's more natural to say "today" (without "from"/から) or "starting today."

Finally, it startIt's finally the first day of April.

I'm transferring to a new school from today.

Now I haveI still missed the rest of my class my former students a little.

A boy in second grade of boy gave me a cute small flower bouquet.

Someone gave me a rose for bubble bath,I also got rose bath powder, a handkerchief, canned cookies, a water bottle, etc.

It's a bit bittersweet to leave my present school.

But I should change my mindmove on.

move on(気持ちを切り替えて)前に進む
move on は「前に進む」というニュアンスの英語表現です。

New shoolThe students at my new school are waiting for me.

I'll do my best!

Feedback

Good luck at your new school!

New shool from today


New school from today

In Japanese, it's normal to say 今日から/"from today", but in English I think it's more natural to say "today" (without "from"/から) or "starting today."

New school fromstarting today

more natural

New school fromstarting today

New sSchool fFrom tToday On.

New school starting (from) today

"from" is optional

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Finally, it start first day of April.


Finally, it startIt's finally the first day of April.

Finally, it startIt's finally the first day of April.

"The first day of April has finally arrived." is another way you could say this.

Finally, it startwas the first day of April.

Finally, it startthe first day of April. has arrived.

Finally, it startthe first day of April has started.

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I transfer to a new school from today.


I'm transferring to a new school from today.

I transfer to a new school from today.

OR Starting today, I'm transferring to a new school.

I transferred to a new school from today.

I transfer to a new school from today on.

From today on is a short form of "From today onward" which basically means 今日から

I transfer to a new school from today.

I have transferred to a new school starting from today.

Now I have still missed the rest of my class students a little.


Now I haveI still missed the rest of my class my former students a little.

Now I haveI still missed the rest of my class studentstudents of my former class a little.

Now I haveI still missed the rest of my classformer students a little.

Now I have still missed the rest of my class students a little.feel almost nostalgic for the friends I've made along the way at my soon to be previous school.

Now, I have still missed the rest of my class studentmates a little.

Now, I have still missed the rest of my class's students a little.

A second grade of boy gave me a cute small flower bouquet.


A boy in second grade of boy gave me a cute small flower bouquet.

A second grade of boy gave me a cute small flower bouquet.

A second grade of boy gave me a cute small flower bouquet.

or "A boy from second grade"

A sSecond grade ofyear High school boy gave me a cute small flower bouquet.

"Second Grade" は小学校の学生感じ。

A second grade ofophomore boy gave me a cute small flower bouquet.

The "second grade" usually refers to primary school, while "sophomore" refers to the second grade of any school. Where I'm from, though, if it's the second grade of high school, then we much more commonly say "ninth grade." It depends on the school system of the area.

A second grade of boy gave me a cute small and cute flower bouquet.

Someone gave me a rose for bubble bath, handkerchief, canned cookies, water bottle etc.


Someone gave me a rose for bubble bath,I also got rose bath powder, a handkerchief, canned cookies, a water bottle, etc.

SomeoneOthers gave me a roses for a bubble bath, a handkerchief, canned cookies, and a water bottle, etc.

Someone gave me a rose for bubble baths, handkerchief, canned cookies, water bottle etc.

Someonand then someone else gave me a rose for bubble bath, handkerchief, canned cookies, water bottle , among other cute presentsetc.

Someone gave me a rose petals for a bubble bath, a handkerchief, canned cookies, a water bottle etc.

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It's a bit bittersweet to leave present school.


It's a bit bittersweet to leave my present school.

It's a bit bittersweet to leave my present school.

It's a bit bittersweet to leave presentthis school.

It's a bit bittersweet, having to leave presentthis school.

It's a bit bittersweet to leave my present school.

It's a bit bittersweet to leave my present school.

But I should change my mind.


But I should change my mindmove on.

move on(気持ちを切り替えて)前に進む move on は「前に進む」というニュアンスの英語表現です。

But I should change my mind.attitude.

fits a little better with what you're trying to express

But I should change my mind.look on the bright side

The sentence is grammatically correct but a bit unnatural

But I shouldcan't change my mind.

But I should change my mindset.

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New shool students are waiting me.


New shoolThe students at my new school are waiting for me.

New shool studentsThe students at my new school are waiting me.

New shool students are waiting me.

New shool studentskids at a new school are waiting me.!

New shool studentclassmates are waiting me.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll do my best!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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