Nov. 30, 2020
New Rules for theme park
Today one of our theme parks reopen again.
I didn’t know that!
But according to the news all the tickets sold out already a months ago.
Anyway, good to see many happy faces.
But I also reading another news from Japan.
There theme park also reopen after a long time.
But they advise the customers not to scream!
That is such discourage rules!
You go to theme park, you want to have fun and release the stress.
Sorry! No scream in the park.
Would like to go this park and have fun time?
New Rules for the Theme pPark
Since it's a title, it should be capitalised.
Today one of our theme parks reopens again.
Since you're talking about one theme park you need "reopens."
I didn’t know that!
But according to the news all of the tickets had already sold out already a months ago.
Anyway, it's good to see many happy faces.
But I also reading another news from Japan.
There theme parks also reopened there after a long time.
But they advise the customers not to scream!
That is such a discourageing rules!
YWhen you go to theme park, you want to have fun and release thsome stress.
Sorry!
No screaming in the park.
You could put "No screaming" or "Don't scream."
Would you like to go to this park and have a fun time?
Feedback
I hope you get to go to a theme park soon!
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New Rules for theme park New Rules for the Theme Since it's a title, it should be capitalised. |
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Today one of our theme parks reopen again. Today one of our theme parks reopens again. Since you're talking about one theme park you need "reopens." |
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I didn’t know that! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But according to the news all the tickets sold out already a months ago. But according to the news all of the tickets had already sold out |
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Anyway, good to see many happy faces. Anyway, it's good to see many happy faces. |
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But I also reading another news from Japan. But I also reading |
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There theme park also reopen after a long time. The |
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But they advise the customers not to scream! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That is such discourage rules! That is such a discourag |
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You go to theme park, you want to have fun and release the stress.
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Sorry! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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No scream in the park. No screaming in the park. You could put "No screaming" or "Don't scream." |
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Would like to go this park and have fun time? Would you like to go to this park and have a fun time? |
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