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chicory

yesterday

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New Routine

My last second post was a complete mess, so a lot of people helped me fix it. Thank you so much. However, I realized that it's difficult to find time to carefully review it during the week. So, I'm thinking about continuing to post as much as possible every day, and doing my review all at once on the weekend. I hope this method works out.I relied heavily on Google Translate today. See you tomorrow.


前回の私の2回目の投稿があまりにもポンコツだったために、たくさんの人に直していただきました。どうもありがとう。それにしても、平日は丁寧に復習をしている時間をもつのが難しいということに気がつきました。平日はできるだけ続けて投稿して、週末にまとめて復習しようかなと考えています。この方法がうまくいくといいな。今日は Google 翻訳にかなり頼ってしまいました。また明日。

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New Routine

My last second post was a complete mess, so a lot of people helped me fix it.

Thank you so much.

However, I realized that it's difficult to find time to carefully review it during the week.

This just makes it a little more natural.

So, I'm thinking about continuing to post as much as possible every day, and doing my review all at once on the weekend.

I hope this method works out.

I relied heavily on Google Translate today.

See you tomorrow.

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いい英文ですね。頑張ってください。

New Routine

My last second post last time was a complete mess, so a lot of people helped me fix it.

Thank you so much.

However, I realized that it's difficult to find time to carefully review ithe corrections during the week.

So, I'm thinking about continuing to post as much as possible every day, and doing my review all at once on the weekend.

I hope this method works out.

I relied heavily on Google Translate today.

See you tomorrow.

My last second last post was a complete mess, so a lot of people helped me fix it.

However, I realized that it's difficult to find time to carefully review edits during the week.

- I think it's a bit more clear to specify what you are talking about because with 'it' you could be referring to the text you wrote or the edits people made but as a reader I'm not sure which one you mean

So, I'm thinking about continuing to post as much as possible every day, and doing my review all at once on the weekend.

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doppler4221a

yesterday

0

Best of luck!

gaezer's avatar
gaezer

yesterday

2

???
"However, I realized that it's difficult to find time to carefully reviewed it during the week." is ungrammatical...

gaezer's avatar
gaezer

yesterday

2

I mean "reviewed its," which is also ungrammatical

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My last second post was a complete mess, so a lot of people helped me fix it.


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However, I realized that it's difficult to find time to carefully review it during the week.


However, I realized that it's difficult to find time to carefully review edits during the week.

- I think it's a bit more clear to specify what you are talking about because with 'it' you could be referring to the text you wrote or the edits people made but as a reader I'm not sure which one you mean

However, I realized that it's difficult to find time to carefully review ithe corrections during the week.

However, I realized that it's difficult to find time to carefully review it during the week.

This just makes it a little more natural.

So, I'm thinking about continuing to post as much as possible every day, and doing my review all at once on the weekend.


So, I'm thinking about continuing to post as much as possible every day, and doing my review all at once on the weekend.

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I hope this method works out.


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I relied heavily on Google Translate today.


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See you tomorrow.


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