I went to a newrecently opened ramen restaurant in my neighborhood.

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I went to a new ramen restaurant in my neighborhood.

When I bought a meal ticket and handed it to the clerk, I was asked about the amount of vegetables and whether garlic was necessaryI wanted garlic.

I ordered mucha lot of vegetables and said yes to the garlic.

However aAll the customers who came after me ordered, however, ordered their ramen without garlic.

I think they were probably concerned about the smell, but I thought the one with garlic iwas definitely more delicious.

However, I thought that it might be forgeared more towards young people because there was a lot of oil.

残念ですね。

I thoughtink I might go again.

やった！

I went to a new opened ramen restaurant in my neighborhood.

When I bought a meal ticket and handed it to the clerk, I was asked about the amount of vegetables and whether garlic was necessarygarlic I'd like.

To sound more natural

I ordered muchlots of vegetables and garlic.

However, all the customers who came after me ordered without no garlic.

To sound more natural

I think they were probably concerned about the smell, but I thought the one with garlic iswould definitely be more delicious.

I thoughtink I might go again.

I went to a new opened ramen restaurant that opened in my neighborhood recently.

When I bought a meal ticket and handed it to the clerk, I washe asked about the amount ofme how much vegetables and whether garlic was necessarygarlic I wanted.

I ordered mucha lot of vegetables and garlic.

However, all the customers who came after me ordered withoutasked for no garlic.

I think they were probably concerned about the smell, but I thought the oneat ramen with garlic is definitely more delicious.

The ramen was delicious withand had plenty of bean sprouts.

However, I thought that itgarlic/bean sprouts? might be for young people because there was a lot of oil.

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I thoughtink I might go again.