Aug. 8, 2022
New President of Colombia
Gustavo Petro, former Mayor of Bogota, was elected president of Colombia on june 19. It is the first time Colombia is governed by a leftist politician. This represented a blow to traditional parties which have been losing power in recent years.
Petro has impacted young colombians the most. He has the necessary communication competences to address people in a compelling manner. That is what makes him unique in Colombia. People are believing all the information he delivers.
The most influencial proposal of Petro was the rejection of the status quo. He plans on making strides towards a better future for Colombia. He has stated that he conveys transparency to this country. In spite of the fact that this statement includes an arrogant sentiment, it is indeed true.
Colombia is a country in which the corruption seems to be present in absolutely every polician. Petro exhibits a record which does not hold any issue related to corruption. That itself is worthy of attention, considering that colombians are used to seeing its politicians involved in an immense quantity of corruption issues.
Aside from that, in the last few years, Petro has gleaned all the attributes required for making a notable change in Colombia. Nevertheless, there remains an important question, ¿will these changes be for good or will we end up with a country in a worser situation than now?
New President of Colombia
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Nevertheless, there remains an important question, ¿will these changes be for the good or will we end up with a country in a worser situation than now?
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Thanks for teaching us about Colombian politics. I found this very interesting. Best of luck to you and the people of Colombia. I'm hoping for the best!
Also, this was very well written. Excellent job!
New President of Colombia
Gustavo Petro, former Mayor of Bogota, was elected pthe President of Colombia on jJune 19.
It is the first time Colombia is governed by a leftist politician.
This represented a blow to the traditional parties which have been losing power in recent years.
Petro has impacted young colombians the most.
He has the necessary communication competences to address people in a compelling manner.
That is what makes him unique in Colombia.
People are believing all the information/message he delivers.
Or "People believe in what he says."
The most influencial proposal of Petro was the rejection of the status quo.
He plans on making strides towards a better future for Colombia.
He has stated that he conveys transparency to this country.
In spite of the fact that this statement includes an arrogant sentiment, it is indeed true.
Colombia is a country in which the corruption seems to be present in absolutely every polician.
Petro exhibits a record which does not hold any issue related to corruption.
That itself is worthy of attention, considering that colombians are used to seeing its politicians involved in an immense quantity ofnumerous/various/multiple corruption issues/scandals.
"immense quantity" sounds a bit strange. I feel like you can get the same message across using a simpler word that implies "a lot".
Aside from that, in the last few years, Petro has gleanedshown all the attributes required for making a notable change in Colombia.
"gleaned" also sounds strange and not natural.
Nevertheless, there remains an important question, ¿: will these changes be for the good of Colombia or will we end up with a country in a worser situation than now?
"Worser" is not a word. "Worse" implies the "lowest" something can be. So nothing can be "worser" than worse.
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