July 15, 2023
New phone
My birthday soon and I'm choosing the new phone. But, I ran into a problem. What kind of phone should I choose? I already have chosen, that it will samsung. At first, I wanted to buy an iPhone, but these phones don't work in my country anymore. So, I have chosen samsung. I think the phone which is folding is cool. But I'm not sure how long this phone screen will work. This choice is so difficult. It would be easier if I could buy an iPhone. I decided between samsung flip3,s22 and s22+. This every phones has advantages and disadvantages. It's so hard to think about it. I didn't think that my birthday will be so hard.
New phone
My birthday is coming soon and I'm choosing thea new phone.
“My birthday is soon” is also correct. You can also put a comma after “soon,” but that is not necessary.
But, I ran into a problem.
Usually you do not need to put a comma after conjunctions.
What kind of phone should I choose?
I have already have chosen,decided that it will sbe a Samsung.
It is acceptable to put “I already have,” but it sounds more natural to have the “already” between “have” and the verb.
The conjunction “that” does not need a comma before it. Usually, “choose” is not used to introduce a “that” clause. If company names are originally capitalized, they should always be capitalized.
Here, “Samsung” is an adjective (“What kind of phone?”) being used as a noun (the “phone” in “Samsung phone” is implied) and you should use ”a” as an article. “I have already decided that it will be Samsung” is fine if you mean “I have already decided that the company will be Samsung” but I think your wording mostly implies “I have already decided that the phone will be a Samsung phone.”
Other correct versions of this sentence: “I have already chosen to get a Samsung.” “I have already decided on a Samsung.” “I have already decided it will be a Samsung.”
At first, I wanted to buy an iPhone, but these phones don't work in my country anymore.
So, I have chosen sSamsung.
(I am reading this as “I have chosen the company Samsung” as opposed to the above comments on the previous correction.)
I think the phone which isthat foldings is cool.
You use “which” when introducing information that is not necessary to the meaning of the sentence; if the information is necessary, you should use “that.” For example, in your sentence, the detail that the phone folds is necessary to describe the phone that is cool, so you should use “that.”
“Is folding” is fine; I just prefer “folds.”
But I'm not sure how long thits phone screen will work.
This choice is so difficult.
It would be easier if I could buy an iPhone.
I decided between sSamsung fFlip3,s S22 and sS22+.
This eEvery phones has advantages and disadvantages.
It's so hard to think about it.
I didn't think that my birthday willould be so hard.
Past tense of “think” plus a subordinate clause uses the conditional in the clause.
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Happy birthday!
July 16, 2023
Thanks a lot!
New phone
My birthday is soon and I'm choosing thea new phone.
But, I ran into a problem.
What kind of phone should I choose?
I have already have chosen, that it will be samsung.
At first, I wanted to buy an iPhone, but these phones don't work in my country anymore.
So, I have chosen samsung.
I think the phone which is folding is cool.
But I'm not sure how long this phone screen will work.
This choice is so difficult.
It would be easier if I could buy an iPhone.
I decided between samsung flip3,s22 and s22+.
This eEvery phones has advantages and disadvantages.
It's so hard to think about it.
I didn't think that my birthday willould be so hard.
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Some small grammar errors, but mostly correct. Well done!
July 16, 2023
Thanks!
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My birthday soon and I'm choosing the new phone. My birthday is soon and I'm choosing My birthday is coming soon and I'm choosing “My birthday is soon” is also correct. You can also put a comma after “soon,” but that is not necessary. |
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But, I ran into a problem. This sentence has been marked as perfect! But Usually you do not need to put a comma after conjunctions. |
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I already have chosen, that it will samsung. I have already I have already It is acceptable to put “I already have,” but it sounds more natural to have the “already” between “have” and the verb. The conjunction “that” does not need a comma before it. Usually, “choose” is not used to introduce a “that” clause. If company names are originally capitalized, they should always be capitalized. Here, “Samsung” is an adjective (“What kind of phone?”) being used as a noun (the “phone” in “Samsung phone” is implied) and you should use ”a” as an article. “I have already decided that it will be Samsung” is fine if you mean “I have already decided that the company will be Samsung” but I think your wording mostly implies “I have already decided that the phone will be a Samsung phone.” Other correct versions of this sentence: “I have already chosen to get a Samsung.” “I have already decided on a Samsung.” “I have already decided it will be a Samsung.” |
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At first, I wanted to buy an iPhone, but these phones don't work in my country anymore. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, I have chosen samsung. This sentence has been marked as perfect! So, I have chosen (I am reading this as “I have chosen the company Samsung” as opposed to the above comments on the previous correction.) |
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I think the phone which is folding is cool. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I think the phone You use “which” when introducing information that is not necessary to the meaning of the sentence; if the information is necessary, you should use “that.” For example, in your sentence, the detail that the phone folds is necessary to describe the phone that is cool, so you should use “that.” “Is folding” is fine; I just prefer “folds.” |
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But I'm not sure how long this phone screen will work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! But I'm not sure how long |
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This choice is so difficult. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It would be easier if I could buy an iPhone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I decided between samsung flip3,s22 and s22+. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I decided between |
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This every phones has advantages and disadvantages.
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It's so hard to think about it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It's so hard to think about |
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