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meanbowler

Aug. 2, 2020

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New or old?

New or old? I know this question does not make a lot of sense, but I saw this question in my book and I have to write about that. Of course, everybody wants to buy something new, and nobody wants to buy something which is old. However, that depends upon the fact that whether or not you have sufficient money to buy that thing. For instance, you would like to buy a new fridge; however, you do not have a sufficient amount of money to buy that. In this case, if you want a fridge, you have to buy a second-hand fridge because you cannot afford a new one.

In my opinion, you should always try to buy new electrical appliances. I have had many bad experiences in which I bought some old equipment and appliances that only lasted for a month or so. Hence, I strongly recommend you to always buy new stuff.

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However, thaSometimes it depends upon the fact that whether or not you have sufficient money to buy thate thing.

For instance, you would like to buy a new fridge;, however, you do not have a sufficient amount ofenough money to buy thait.

not wrong, just too wordy.

In this case, if you want a fridge, you would have to buy a second-hand fridge because you cannot afford a new one.

Hence, I strongly recommend that you to always buy new stuff.

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tgb

Aug. 3, 2020

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In this case, if you want a fridge, you would have to buy a second-hand fridge because you cannot afford a new one.

"would" here is optional and indicates a formal tone register.

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New or old?

New or old?

I know this question does not make a lot of sense, but I saw ithis question in my book and I have to write about thait.

This removes the repeat of ‘question’

Of course, everybody wants to buy something new, and nobody wants to buy something which is old.

However, thatis depends upon the fact that whether or not you have sufficient money to buy that new thing.

For instance, you wouldmight like to buy a new fridge; however, you domay not have a sufficient amount of money to buy thatone.

In thisat case, if you want a fridge, you have to buy a second-hand fridge(an old one) because you cannot afford a new one.

This removes the need to repeat ‘fridge’ and explains the concept that a second hand fridge is an old one.

I have had many bad experiences in which I bought some old equipment andor appliances that and they only lasted for a month or so.

Hence, I strongly recommend that you to always buy new stuff.

New or old?


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New or old?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I know this question does not make a lot of sense, but I saw this question in my book and I have to write about that.


I know this question does not make a lot of sense, but I saw ithis question in my book and I have to write about thait.

This removes the repeat of ‘question’

Of course, everybody wants to buy something new, and nobody wants to buy something which is old.


Of course, everybody wants to buy something new, and nobody wants to buy something which is old.

However, that depends upon the fact that whether or not you have sufficient money to buy that thing.


However, thatis depends upon the fact that whether or not you have sufficient money to buy that new thing.

However, thaSometimes it depends upon the fact that whether or not you have sufficient money to buy thate thing.

For instance, you would like to buy a new fridge; however, you do not have a sufficient amount of money to buy that.


For instance, you wouldmight like to buy a new fridge; however, you domay not have a sufficient amount of money to buy thatone.

For instance, you would like to buy a new fridge;, however, you do not have a sufficient amount ofenough money to buy thait.

not wrong, just too wordy.

In this case, if you want a fridge, you have to buy a second-hand fridge because you cannot afford a new one.


In thisat case, if you want a fridge, you have to buy a second-hand fridge(an old one) because you cannot afford a new one.

This removes the need to repeat ‘fridge’ and explains the concept that a second hand fridge is an old one.

In this case, if you want a fridge, you would have to buy a second-hand fridge because you cannot afford a new one.

In my opinion, you should always try to buy new electrical appliances.


I have had many bad experiences in which I bought some equipment and appliances that only lasted for a month or so.


Hence, I strongly recommend you to always buy new stuff.


Hence, I strongly recommend that you to always buy new stuff.

Hence, I strongly recommend that you to always buy new stuff.

I have had many bad experiences in which I bought some old equipment and appliances that only lasted for a month or so.


I have had many bad experiences in which I bought some old equipment andor appliances that and they only lasted for a month or so.

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