July 20, 2023
New lands will be discovered
We have been warned by enormous news about greenhouse gas issues; such examples always stating how harder it is for polar bears to acquire enough food to survive because glaciers melt upon temperature increases.
On the other hand, as more and more land is exposed to us. The countries like Russia and Canada may benefit from the warmer earth, the two giant countries probably discover more new lands as the ice recedes. And some new species from the areas may present to us, a super, miraculous wonderland are awakening.
Throughout human evolving history, most things or everything has developed both positive and negative impacts.
We have been warned by enormous news about greenhouse gas issues; such examples always statinge how much harder it is for polar bears to acquire enough food to survive because glaciers melt upon temperature increases.
On the other hand, as more and more land iss are exposed to us.
This sentence and the next should be together.
The countries like Russia and Canada may benefit from the warmer earth, t. The two giant countries will probably discover more new lands as the ice recedes.
And some new species from the areas may present to us, a super, miraculous wonderland are awakening.
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Very good. Some of your sentences should continue to the next sentence to complete the thought.
July 20, 2023
Thank you for your corrections! :-)
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New lands will be discovered |
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We have been warned by enormous news about greenhouse gas issues; such examples always stating how harder it is for polar bears to acquire enough food to survive because glaciers melt upon temperature increases. We have been warned by enormous news about greenhouse gas issues; such examples always stat |
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On the other hand, as more and more land is exposed to us. On the other hand, as more and more land This sentence and the next should be together. |
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The countries like Russia and Canada may benefit from the warmer earth, the two giant countries probably discover more new lands as the ice recedes.
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And some new species from the areas may present to us, a super, miraculous wonderland are awakening. And some new species from the areas may present to us, a super, miraculous wonderland |
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Throughout human evolving history, most things or everything has developed both positive and negative impacts. |
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