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Berra226

July 12, 2025

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"New here ✨ Let’s practice English together

Hi! First of all, how are you? I'm also new to this platform, and I want to improve my English. I live in Türkiye. I like looking at my phone, talking with friends, chatting, or walking outside. What about you? What do you like doing? How old are you?
I hope we can help each other and become friends.

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I'm also new to this platform, and I want to improve my English.

I live in Tüurkiyey.

english changes the names for a lot of different countries

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Hello! I'm doing fantastic. This platform really is amazing! I really like walking outside and talking to my friends too. I also really enjoy reading and playing video games. Currently, I'm 21 years old. What about you? How old are you? I would love to chat with you more! Your English is pretty good!

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Berra226

July 13, 2025

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Haha, thank you! You're so sweet 😄 I'm actually 16 . But I really enjoy meeting new people and practicing my English like this. It's fun and helpful! Reading is one of my favorite things too – I can spend hours with a good book. And I’m always on my phone too, just like you 😅 You're from Canada, right? I’ve always wanted to learn more about life there! Is it really super cold all the time? I'd love to hear what it's like. And yes, I hope we can be great friends and help each other out! :)

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Berra226

July 13, 2025

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Haha, thank you! You're so sweet 😄 I'm actually 16 . But I really enjoy meeting new people and practicing my English like this. It's fun and helpful! Reading is one of my favorite things too – I can spend hours with a good book. And I’m always on my phone too, just like you 😅 You're from Canada, right? I’ve always wanted to learn more about life there! Is it really super cold all the time? I'd love to hear what it's like. And yes, I hope we can be great friends and help each other out! :)

Hi!

First of all, how are you?

I'm also new to this platform, and I want to improve my English.

I live in Türkiye.

I like looking at my phone, talking with friends, chatting, orand walking outside.

"And" would be more suitable than "or" here. "Or" implies that only one of these things can be activities you enjoy at any given time, while "and" encompasses all of them.

What about you?

What do you like doing?

How old are you?

I hope we can help each other and become friends.

Feedback

Welcome! I hope you will find this platform useful for your studies. Anyway, this was well-written with no major mistakes at all, so good job!

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Berra226

July 13, 2025

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Thank you so much! I’m really happy to hear that. I hope this platform helps me improve my English and studies too. I’m excited to keep learning and practicing here. Looking forward to chatting more with you!

I live in Türkiye.


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I live in Tüurkiyey.

english changes the names for a lot of different countries

I like looking at my phone, talking with friends, chatting, or walking outside.


I like looking at my phone, talking with friends, chatting, orand walking outside.

"And" would be more suitable than "or" here. "Or" implies that only one of these things can be activities you enjoy at any given time, while "and" encompasses all of them.

What about you?


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What do you like doing?


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How old are you?


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I hope we can help each other and become friends.


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I'm also new to this platform, and I want to improve my English.


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