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emilia_

Jan. 4, 2023

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New haircut

My husband started to be fed up with hairdressers. He always back from them unhappy. He bought a hair clipper to get a haircut at home. I was going to be his new hairdresser. My husband has a medium-length hairstyle, so getting a haircut is not so easy. Anyway, I decided to try it after watching some tutorials on YouTube. I made a couple of mistakes but my husband was happier than ever with his new haircut and many people at his work complimented his haircut. Even after two months, the haircut looks great.
Yesterday I asked my husband for the same favour. Unfortunately, now my haircut isn't great. He cut too much and the haircut isn't straight. Now I need to wait a month or two until my hair will grow and then he will try again in a different way.

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New hHaircut

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

My husband started to begetting fed up with hairdressers.

He always came back from them unhappy.

He bought a hair clipper to get a haircut at home.

I was going to be his new hairdresser.

My husband has a medium-length hairstyle, so gettingiving him a haircut iwas not going to be so easy.

Anyway, I decided to try it after watching some tutorials on YouTube.

I made a couple of mistakes but my husband was happier than ever with his new haircut and many people at his work complimented his haircum on it.

Even after two months, the haircut looks great.

Yesterday I asked my husband for the same favour.

Unfortunately, now my haircut isn't great.

He cut too much and the haircut isends aren't straight.

Now I need to wait a month or two until my hair will grows and then he will try again in a different way.

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Congratulations to you on giving your husband a terrific haircut! I was so hoping you'd feel the same way when he gave you yours. Oh, well, practice makes better! Great writing! I enjoyed reading this.

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emilia_

Jan. 5, 2023

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Thank you. I hope next time will be better :)

New haircut

My husband started to beget fed up with hairdressers.

He always comes back from them unhappy.

He bought a hair clipper to get ahave me cut his haircut at home.

sounds more natural

I wasam going to be his new hairdresser.

since this is for the future

My husband has a medium-length hairstyle, so gecutting ahis haircut is not so easy.

Even after two months, thehis haircut looks great.

Unfortunately, now my haircut isn't as great.

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LOL I didn't expect it to go that way. I'm sorry about your hair! I hope it grows back quickly.

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emilia_

Jan. 5, 2023

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Me neither. I hope that next time will be better. Now my husband knows what not to do for sure :)

New haircut

My husband has started to be fed up with hairdressers.

He always comes back from them unhappy.

He bought a hair clipper to get a haircut at home.

I was going to be his new hairdresser.

My husband has a medium-length hairstyle, so getting a haircut is not so easy.

Anyway, I decided to try it after watching some tutorials on YouTube.

I made a couple of mistakes but my husband was happier than ever with his new haircut and many people at his workplace complimented his haircut.

Even after two months, the haircut still looks great.

Yesterday I asked my husband for the same favour.

Unfortunately, now my haircut isn't great.

He cut too much and the haircut isn't straight.

Now I need to wait a month or two until my hair will growgrows out and then he will try again in a different way.

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I hope your next haircut is better :)

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emilia_

Jan. 5, 2023

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Me too. Thank you :)

A New hHaircut

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My husband has started to beget fed up with hairdressers.

He always comes back from them unhappy.

He bought a hair clipper to get a haircut at home.

I was going to be his new hairdresser.

My husband has a medium-length hairstyle, so getting a haircut is not so easy.

Anyway, I decided to try it after watching some tutorials on YouTube.

I made a couple of mistakes but my husband was happier than ever with his new haircut and many people at his work complimented his haircut.

Even after two months, the haircut looks great.

Yesterday I asked my husband for the same favour.

Unfortunately, now my haircut isn't great.

He cut too much and the haircut isn't straight.

Now I need to wait a month or two until my hair will grow and then he will try again in a different way.

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emilia_

Jan. 5, 2023

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Thank you.

New haircut


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He always back from them unhappy.


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He bought a hair clipper to get a haircut at home.


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He bought a hair clipper to get ahave me cut his haircut at home.

sounds more natural

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since this is for the future

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My husband has a medium-length hairstyle, so getting a haircut is not so easy.


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My husband has a medium-length hairstyle, so getting a haircut is not so easy.

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Anyway, I decided to try it after watching some tutorials on YouTube.


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I made a couple of mistakes but my husband was happier than ever with his new haircut and many people at his work complimented his haircut.


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I made a couple of mistakes but my husband was happier than ever with his new haircut and many people at his workplace complimented his haircut.

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Even after two months, the haircut looks great.


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Even after two months, the haircut still looks great.

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Yesterday I asked my husband for the same favour.


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Unfortunately, now my haircut isn't great.


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Unfortunately, now my haircut isn't as great.

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He cut too much and the haircut isn't straight.


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He cut too much and the haircut isends aren't straight.

Now I need to wait a month or two until my hair will grow and then he will try again in a different way.


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Now I need to wait a month or two until my hair will growgrows out and then he will try again in a different way.

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