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rain41

Oct. 15, 2025

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I am an industrial engineer. I haven't job not yet but I did internship 3.5 months. This is was tire factory. I am looking for a new job because I'm a new graduate and I am very enthusiastic. I want to improve factory process and I was develop learn university knowledges. I hope to finding job coming soon.

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nNew gGraduate

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I am an industrial engineer.

I don't haven't a job not yet, but I did internship 3.5 monthsa 3 1/2 month internship.

We'd typically use the duration like an adjective for the internship. I would change the 3.5 to 3 1/2, since that's how it would be spoken, "three and a half..." whereas 3.5 looks more like "three point five"

This is was at a tire factory.

I am looking for a new job because I'm a new graduate and I am very enthusiastic.

I want to improve factory process and I was develop learn university knowledges.

Sorry, the last part of the sentence doesn't make sense and I wasn't able to guess what you mean to say. Is it about something you did at university?

I hope to finding a job coming soon.

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Great job

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nNew gGraduate

Title capitalization rules

I am an industrial engineer.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I haven't job not yet but I did internship 3.5 months.


I don't haven't a job not yet, but I did internship 3.5 monthsa 3 1/2 month internship.

We'd typically use the duration like an adjective for the internship. I would change the 3.5 to 3 1/2, since that's how it would be spoken, "three and a half..." whereas 3.5 looks more like "three point five"

This is was tire factory.


This is was at a tire factory.

I am looking for a new job because I'm a new graduate and I am very enthusiastic.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to improve factory process and I was develop learn university knowledges.


I want to improve factory process and I was develop learn university knowledges.

Sorry, the last part of the sentence doesn't make sense and I wasn't able to guess what you mean to say. Is it about something you did at university?

I hope to finding job coming soon.


I hope to finding a job coming soon.

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