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New Electric Shaver
I bought a new electric shaver, because the old one was broken.
It was probably due to my poor charging habits.
I often left it charging 24 hours a day.
Developing good charging habits can extend battery life.
It takes about one hour to charge a new shaver.
Unplug the shaver from the charger after it is fully charged.
Otherwise, its service life will be shortened.
I'm sure the shaver is full of power to shave your beard.
我购入新的电动剃须刀，因为旧的坏了。
可能是我的充电行为不太好。
经常24小时都在充电。
养成良好的充电行为能延长电池寿命。
新的剃须刀充电时间大约一小时。
充满电之后，请勿继续充电。
否则缩短其使用寿命。
我肯定这把剃刀有足够的动力刮掉你的胡子。
New Electric Shaver
I bought a new electric shaver, because the old one was broken.
It was probably due to my poor charging habits.
Correct as is. You could also say: This was probably caused by my poor charging habits.
I often left it chargingplugged in for 24 hours a day.
“Plugged in” is more natural for devices.
Developing good charging habits can extend battery life.
It takes about one hour to charge a new shaver.
Unplug the shaver from the charger afteronce it is fully charged.
“Once” flows more naturally here.
Otherwise, its service lifespan will be shortened.
“Lifespan” is more common than “service life” in this context.
I'’m sure the shaver is full ofhas enough power to shave myour beard.
“Has enough power” is more natural; “my beard” fits the personal tone.
For a humorous, playful feel:
“I’m sure this shaver has all the power it needs to tackle your beard!”
“I’m confident this shaver is strong enough to handle any beard.”
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Great post! Your points are clear, and easy to follow.
写得很好！继续练习，你的表达越来越棒了！
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New Electric Shaver This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I bought a new electric shaver, because the old one was broken. I bought a new electric shaver |
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It might be that my charging behavior is not very good. |
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It's often charged 24 hours a day. |
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Charging devices properly could help to extend their battery life. |
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It takes about one hour to charge a new shaver. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Unplug the shaver from the charger after it is fully charged. Unplug the shaver “Once” flows more naturally here. |
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Otherwise, its service life will be shortened. Otherwise, its “Lifespan” is more common than “service life” in this context. |
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I'm sure the shaver is full of power to shave your beard. I “Has enough power” is more natural; “my beard” fits the personal tone. For a humorous, playful feel: “I’m sure this shaver has all the power it needs to tackle your beard!” “I’m confident this shaver is strong enough to handle any beard.” |
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It was probably due to my poor charging habits. It was probably due to my poor charging habits. Correct as is. You could also say: This was probably caused by my poor charging habits. |
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I often left it charging 24 hours a day. I often left it “Plugged in” is more natural for devices. |
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Developing good charging habits can extend battery life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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