Nov. 23, 2025
New Daughter
My new daughter had been born last Monday.
She came back home from the hospital 2days ago.
She is perfectly cute.
My superior daughter was little bit narvus to tatch her at first.
But now, she cares her sistar and strokes her head duaring crying.
She hasn't hold her sistar yet, but I think that she will tries soon.
I wish my daughters will get along with each other.
New Daughter
My new daughter had beenwas born last Monday.
She came back home from the hospital 2 days ago.
She is perfectreally cute.
My superioolder daughter was a little bit naervous to tatouch her at first.
But now, she cares for her sistaer and strokes her head duaringwhen she's crying.
She hasn't hoeld her sistaer yet, but I think that she will triesy soon.
I wishhope my daughters will get along with each other.
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Congratulations!
My new daughter had beenwas born last Monday.
She came back home from the hospital 2two days ago.
If you want to use the digit 2, you need a space after it. However, for small numbers, it often reads better to use the word rather than the digit.
She is perfect(totally / extremely) cute.
We don't use perfectly as an adjective like this. totally has some of the same "complete" implication, but does come across as somewhat casual.
My superioolder daughter was little bit naervous to tatouch her at first.
superior = better, not older
But now, she cares for her sistaer and strokes her head duaring cryingwhen her sister cries.
She hasn't hoeld her sistaer yet, but I think that she will triesy soon.
I wishhope my daughters will get along with each other.
"wish" in this context has a sense of "your daughters don't get along together and you want that to be different", rather than that you haven't seen if they do yet. "hope" doesn't have this extra implication, so works better here.
My new daughter had beenwas born last Monday.
She came back home from the hospital 2two days ago.
My superioolder daughter was little bit narvus to tatch her at first.
"Superior" daughter would suggest that one daughter is better than the other. You mean "older" here to mean that her age is higher.
But now, she cares about her sistaer and strokes her head duaringwhen she is crying.
She hasn't hoeld her sistaer yet, but I think that she will triesy soon.
I wishhope that my daughters will get along with each other.
My new daughter had been born last Monday.
This is grammatically correct, but a more natural phrase would be.
"My newest daughter was born last Monday."
She came back home from the hospital 2 days ago.
She is perfectly cute.
My superioolder daughter was little bit naervous to tatouch her at first.
But now, she cares for her sistaer and strokes her head duaringwhen she's crying.
She hasn't hoeld her sistaer yet, but I think that she will triesy soon.
I wishhope my daughters will get along with each other.
"I wish my daughters will get along with each other." sounds like your daughters are "currently not getting along with each other," but that you "want them to get along with each other".
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Great Job! I was able to fully understand what you were saying. I hope your daughters get along too!
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My new daughter had been born last Monday. My new daughter had been born last Monday. This is grammatically correct, but a more natural phrase would be. "My newest daughter was born last Monday." My new daughter My new daughter My new daughter |
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She came back home from the hospital 2days ago. She came back home from the hospital 2 days ago. She came back home from the hospital She came back home from the hospital If you want to use the digit 2, you need a space after it. However, for small numbers, it often reads better to use the word rather than the digit. She came back home from the hospital 2 days ago. |
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She is perfectly cute. This sentence has been marked as perfect! She is We don't use perfectly as an adjective like this. totally has some of the same "complete" implication, but does come across as somewhat casual. She is |
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I wish my daughters will get along with each other. I "I wish my daughters will get along with each other." sounds like your daughters are "currently not getting along with each other," but that you "want them to get along with each other". I I "wish" in this context has a sense of "your daughters don't get along together and you want that to be different", rather than that you haven't seen if they do yet. "hope" doesn't have this extra implication, so works better here. I |
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