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emilia_

May 10, 2023

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New charity shop

I've recently discovered another great charity shop and what's more, it's in my neighbourhood, so I can visit it often. It's important to me because I sew my bags and other accessories from fabrics found in charity shops. It's not so easy because I can't always find nice and good quality fabric there, so it's good when I can go there more often. I have more chances to find what I want. I like nature and fabrics that pull me in often are floral or different kinds of botanical patterns. However, last time I found a gorgeous striped pattern fabric and I bought it because it has 60's vibes and I considered that I can sew from it lovely bags.

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NA new charity shop

I've recently discovered another great charity shop and what's more, as it's in my neighbourhood, so I can visit it often.

It's important tofor me because I sew my bags and other accessories from fabrics found in charity shops.

It's not alwayso easy because I can't always find nice and good quality fabric therein the shop, so it's good when I can go therevisit it more often.

I like nature and the fabrics that pullattract me inare often are floral or have different kinds of botanical patterns.

However, last time I found a gorgeous striped pattern fabric andwhich I bought it because it has 60's vibes and I considered. I think that I can sew from itsome lovely bags with it.

A New cCharity sShop

I've recently discovered another great charity shop and what's more,, since it' is in my neighbourhood , so I can visit it often.

It's important to me because I sew my bags and other accessories from fabrics fouthat I find in charity shops.

It's not so easy because I can'they do not always findsell nice and goodhigh quality fabrics there, so it's good when I can go there more often. Therefore I can go there often in search of usable fabrics.

I have morehave a higher chances to find what I want.

I like nature and fabrics that pull me in often are floral or different kinds oftherefore I am drawn to fabrics with floral or botanical patterns.

However, last time I found one with a gorgeous striped pattern fabric andthat I bought it because it hasgives me 60's vibes and I considered. I think that I can seow from it lovely bags from it.

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Good job! Your English is very good, there were not many apparent grammatical errors and I could understand all that you were saying. Most of my corrections were mostly stylistic in order to make the sentences sound a bit more natural. But overall very good job! I would recommend listening to podcasts and reading a lot in English to pick up on these more natural formulations!

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emilia_

May 10, 2023

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Thank you for your correction :) I'd like to sound more natural. I try to listen to podcasts as much as I can.

New charity shop


A New cCharity sShop

NA new charity shop

I've recently discovered another great charity shop and what's more, it's in my neighbourhood, so I can visit it often.


I've recently discovered another great charity shop and what's more,, since it' is in my neighbourhood , so I can visit it often.

I've recently discovered another great charity shop and what's more, as it's in my neighbourhood, so I can visit it often.

It's important to me because I sew my bags and other accessories from fabrics found in charity shops.


It's important to me because I sew my bags and other accessories from fabrics fouthat I find in charity shops.

It's important tofor me because I sew my bags and other accessories from fabrics found in charity shops.

It's not so easy because I can't always find nice and good quality fabric there, so it's good when I can go there more often.


It's not so easy because I can'they do not always findsell nice and goodhigh quality fabrics there, so it's good when I can go there more often. Therefore I can go there often in search of usable fabrics.

It's not alwayso easy because I can't always find nice and good quality fabric therein the shop, so it's good when I can go therevisit it more often.

I have more chances to find what I want.


I have morehave a higher chances to find what I want.

I like nature and fabrics that pull me in often are floral or different kinds of botanical patterns.


I like nature and fabrics that pull me in often are floral or different kinds oftherefore I am drawn to fabrics with floral or botanical patterns.

I like nature and the fabrics that pullattract me inare often are floral or have different kinds of botanical patterns.

However, last time I found a gorgeous striped pattern fabric and I bought it because it has 60's vibes and I considered that I can sew from it lovely bags.


However, last time I found one with a gorgeous striped pattern fabric andthat I bought it because it hasgives me 60's vibes and I considered. I think that I can seow from it lovely bags from it.

However, last time I found a gorgeous striped pattern fabric andwhich I bought it because it has 60's vibes and I considered. I think that I can sew from itsome lovely bags with it.

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