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SummerTeaWater

March 15, 2022

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New Black Tea

I bought many kinds of black teas these days, and I got one of them today.

I am very excited when I received it because it is from Kenya and I like Kenyan's tea very much.

I tasted it for the first time when I went to Japan 5 years ago.

During the trip, I also bought many kinds of teas such as Japanese green tea, famous black tea and so on.

I faced Kenyan black tea at a department store in Tokyo.

I thought it was the same aroma as Indian tea, but it was totally different.

Its unique aroma and flavor made me feel happy.

Now, I have a Kenya black tea made by another brand.

I hope that the taste is good.

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I bought've been buying many kinds of black teas these days, and I gotlately, and one of them I got today.

I amwas very excited when I received it because it is from Kenya and I like Kenyan's tea very much.

I tasted it for the first time when I went to Japan 5 years ago.

I faceound Kenyan black tea at a department store in Tokyo.

Now, I have a Kenyan black tea made by another brand.

I hope that the taste is good.

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Nice! Black tea is good, isn't it!

New Black Tea

I have bought many kinds of black teas these daysrecently, and I got one of them today.

I amwas very excited when I received it because it is from Kenya and I like Kenyan's tea very much.

I tasted it for the first time when I went to Japan 5 years ago.

During the trip, I also bought many kinds of teas such as Japanese green tea, famous black tea and so on.

I facedsaw Kenyan black tea at a department store in Tokyo.

I thought it was the same aroma as Indian tea, but it was totally different.

Its unique aroma and flavor made me feel happy.

Now, I have another brand of Kenyan black tea made by another brand.

I hope that the taste is good.

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Very good writing, you are improving! ^_^

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SummerTeaWater

March 16, 2022

402

Thanks a lot. Your advices are always helpful. \^o^/

New Black Tea

I boughthave been buying many kinds of black teas these daysrecently, and I got one of them today.

You could choose to just take out "these days", but if "these days" is important you can bring "I bought" to present tense and say "I have been buying". There's a few different ways you can write this sentence, honestly.

I amwas very excited when I received it because it is from Kenya and I like Kenyan's tea very much.

"I am" needs to be past tense if you had gotten the tea in the past (earlier). You can either say, "I like Kenya's tea" as a possessive phrase (Kenya has good tea), or "I like Kenyan tea" (Tea from Kenya in general).

I tasted it for the first time when I went to Japan 5 years ago.

During the trip, I also bought many kinds of teas such as Japanese green tea, famous black tea and so on.

I facedsaw Kenyan black tea at a department store in Tokyo.

I thought it was the same aroma as Indian tea, but it was totally different.

Its unique aroma and flavor made me feel happy.

Now, I have a Kenyan black tea made by another brand.

I hope that the taste is good.

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This is really well written! It reminds me as a fellow language learner that our journal entries don't have to be so complicated. We can just simply talk about our new tea. Great job!

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SummerTeaWater

March 16, 2022

402

I appreciate about your comment and advices. :)

New Black Tea

I have bought many kinds of black teas these days, and I gotrecently, and I received one of them today.

I amwas very excited when I received it because it is from Kenya, and I like Kenyan's tea very much.

I tasted it for the first time when I went to Japan 5 years ago.

During the trip, I also bought many kinds of teas such as Japanese green tea, famous black tea and so on.

I facedsaw Kenyan black tea at a department store in Tokyo.

I thought it was the same aroma as Indian tea, but it was totally different.

Its unique aroma and flavor made me feel happy.

Now, I have a Kenyan black tea made by another brand.

I hope that the taste is good.

Feedback

Nice job! Reading this makes me want to drink tea...

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SummerTeaWater

March 16, 2022

402

Thank you very much. :)

New Black Tea


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I bought many kinds of black teas these days, and I got one of them today.


I have bought many kinds of black teas these days, and I gotrecently, and I received one of them today.

I boughthave been buying many kinds of black teas these daysrecently, and I got one of them today.

You could choose to just take out "these days", but if "these days" is important you can bring "I bought" to present tense and say "I have been buying". There's a few different ways you can write this sentence, honestly.

I have bought many kinds of black teas these daysrecently, and I got one of them today.

I bought've been buying many kinds of black teas these days, and I gotlately, and one of them I got today.

I am very excited when I received it because it is from Kenya and I like Kenyan's tea very much.


I amwas very excited when I received it because it is from Kenya, and I like Kenyan's tea very much.

I amwas very excited when I received it because it is from Kenya and I like Kenyan's tea very much.

"I am" needs to be past tense if you had gotten the tea in the past (earlier). You can either say, "I like Kenya's tea" as a possessive phrase (Kenya has good tea), or "I like Kenyan tea" (Tea from Kenya in general).

I amwas very excited when I received it because it is from Kenya and I like Kenyan's tea very much.

I amwas very excited when I received it because it is from Kenya and I like Kenyan's tea very much.

I tasted it for the first time when I went to Japan 5 years ago.


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During the trip, I also bought many kinds of teas such as Japanese green tea, famous black tea and so on.


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I faced Kenyan black tea at a department store in Tokyo.


I facedsaw Kenyan black tea at a department store in Tokyo.

I facedsaw Kenyan black tea at a department store in Tokyo.

I facedsaw Kenyan black tea at a department store in Tokyo.

I faceound Kenyan black tea at a department store in Tokyo.

I thought it was the same aroma as Indian tea, but it was totally different.


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Its unique aroma and flavor made me feel happy.


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Now, I have a Kenya black tea made by another brand.


Now, I have a Kenyan black tea made by another brand.

Now, I have a Kenyan black tea made by another brand.

Now, I have another brand of Kenyan black tea made by another brand.

Now, I have a Kenyan black tea made by another brand.

I hope that the taste is good.


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