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xiangying

Nov. 5, 2021

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New balcony

The property management company removed the old balcony of my apartment today and installed a new balcony at the same time.
My new balcony has a new roof, new railings, and new floors.
There is a nest of pigeons under the eaves of the old balcony, the nest was removed together with the old balcony.
It is very hard to survive without a nest to the pigeons in winter, so my husband put a box on the balcony's floor.
Hoping that the pigeons will treat the box as a nest.

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The property management company removed the old balcony of my apartment today and installed a new balcony at the same time.

My new balcony has a new roof, new railings, and new floors.

There is a nest of pigeons under the eaves of the old balcony, but the nest was removed togetheralong with the old balcony.

It is very hard for pigeons to survive without a nest to the pigeons in winter, so my husband put a box on the balcony's floor.

I'm not sure if "survive" is the best word- are you talking about the pigeons surviving, or you?

HopingWe hope that the pigeons will treat the box as a nest.

New balcony


The property management company removed the old balcony of my apartment today and installed a new balcony at the same time.


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My new balcony has a new roof, new railings, and new floors.


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There is a nest of pigeons under the eaves of the old balcony, the nest was removed together with the old balcony.


There is a nest of pigeons under the eaves of the old balcony, but the nest was removed togetheralong with the old balcony.

It is very hard to survive without a nest to the pigeons in winter, so my husband put a box on the balcony's floor.


It is very hard for pigeons to survive without a nest to the pigeons in winter, so my husband put a box on the balcony's floor.

I'm not sure if "survive" is the best word- are you talking about the pigeons surviving, or you?

Hoping that the pigeons will treat the box as a nest.


HopingWe hope that the pigeons will treat the box as a nest.

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