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hello everyone ,I am new forto this website and I hope you guys couldan help me to improve my writing skill.

hHello everyone , I am new forto this website, and I hope you guys couldan help me to improve my writing skills.

Since I am not a native ,speaker, I need your comments and feedbacks .

"feedback" is almost never plural

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I think this is what you meant to say

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