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alexwong2164

Nov. 20, 2020

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Never let me go 210

Few years ago I make a friend from internet.

We start conversation once a week over skype.

I thought we are making a good progress.

But she suddenly ignoring me.

Anyway, since she keep update her FB regularly.

So, I still feel that I knowing her.

I read her recommend comic, movie…

But recently I notice her choice of movie is kind weird.

I realize maybe we have so different in our interest.

So, that’s why she don’t want to continue making friends with me.

Ayway this movie is a dark movie. (I think and I feel)

Maybe you won’t agree.

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Few years ago, I makde a friend from ion the Internet.

We started to have conversations once a week over sSkype.

I thought we awere makbecoming a good progresfriends.

But she suddenly ignoringghosted me.

"to ghost" is the dedicated verb to mean abruptly ending an online relationship withou explanation.

Anyway, since she keeps updateing her FB regularly, I still feel like knowing here.

I didn't understand what you meant here, "since she did something" is a relative clause, which must always be followed by a main clause. I supposed you wanted to link this sentence with the next one.

So, I still feel that I knowing her.

I read her recommending comics, movies

But recently, I noticed her choices of movie iss are kind of weird.

I realize maybe we have so different in our interesd that our interests were maybe too different.

So, perhaps that’s why she doesn’t want to continue makingus to be friends with manymore.

Anyway, this movie is a dark moviramatic one.

Didn't know what kind of movie you were talking about; if you're talking about your history with this lady (in a metaphorical sense), I'd rather use "dramatic". Dark movies involve fear, sinister ambiances, or even horror.

(at least this is what I think and I feel)

Maybe you won’t agree.

Never let me go 210


Few years ago I make a friend from internet.


Few years ago, I makde a friend from ion the Internet.

We start conversation once a week over skype.


We started to have conversations once a week over sSkype.

I thought we are making a good progress.


I thought we awere makbecoming a good progresfriends.

But she suddenly ignoring me.


But she suddenly ignoringghosted me.

"to ghost" is the dedicated verb to mean abruptly ending an online relationship withou explanation.

Anyway, since she keep update her FB regularly.


Anyway, since she keeps updateing her FB regularly, I still feel like knowing here.

I didn't understand what you meant here, "since she did something" is a relative clause, which must always be followed by a main clause. I supposed you wanted to link this sentence with the next one.

So, I still feel that I knowing her.


So, I still feel that I knowing her.

I read her recommend comic, movie…


I read her recommending comics, movies

But recently I notice her choice of movie is kind weird.


But recently, I noticed her choices of movie iss are kind of weird.

I realize maybe we have so different in our interest.


I realize maybe we have so different in our interesd that our interests were maybe too different.

So, that’s why she don’t want to continue making friends with me.


So, perhaps that’s why she doesn’t want to continue makingus to be friends with manymore.

Ayway this movie is a dark movie.


Anyway, this movie is a dark moviramatic one.

Didn't know what kind of movie you were talking about; if you're talking about your history with this lady (in a metaphorical sense), I'd rather use "dramatic". Dark movies involve fear, sinister ambiances, or even horror.

(I think and I feel)


(at least this is what I think and I feel)

Maybe you won’t agree.


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