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June 30, 2021

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Now, there are only two options. The first one is to move but we like the neighborhood and she would be too pleased to have won. The second one is to go to court. It is going to be very expensive and long in time and energy but this is the only choice you have when you are facing a wall. The hardest part is to prove that this family is doing a lot of noise. So, a court bailiff came to note that the noise do come from their apartment and he will come back a bit later. It is difficult to find the right moment to call him because the noise can be intense but short-lived and starts again once he is gone. At the beginning of the week, with my mom, we went to see a lawyer who is specialized in property law. She was attentive to what we said and I think she managed to grasp the problem and the mentality of this family who is very perverse. She is going to look at our file but she told us that it was already quite exhaustive. We have testimonies of two neighbors and family members who came home and several letters. The lawyer said that she did not respect the rules of the building. Indeed, she put wood floors and tiles instead of carpets and linoleums so the noise is more perceived than before. She did not have to change the floor coverings without authorization and damage the sound quality between the flats. The first part is to gain the nomination of an expert by a judge who will analyze her floors and then we will take the court depending on the results. The French legal system is complicated! As far as the assault is concerned, we have no news. I believe that the case has been dismissed. You can attack people without being summoned by the police. Great!!

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Neighbors (2)

Now,Currently there are only two options to resolve our problems with our neighbor.

It's a bit too abrupt to start a document with "now..." The reader has no idea if this is an interjection, a placement in the present moment or how it relates to what might have gone before.

The first one is to move, but we like the neighborhood and she would be too pleased to have won.

The second one is to go to court.

It is going toThat would be very expensive and take a long in time and energy, but this is the only choice you have when you are facing a wall.

The hardest part is to prove that this family is doingmakes a lot of noise.

So, a court bailiff came to notedocument that the noise does come from their apartment, and he will come back a bit later.

Note can simply mean "observe" and can be informal.

It is difficult to find the right moment to call himsummon the bailiff because the noise can be intense but short-lived and will starts again once he is gone.

At the beginning of the week, we went with my mom, we went to see a lawyer who is specializeds in property law.

One specializes in a professional field not "is specialized"

She was attentive to what we said and I think she managed to grasp the problem and the mentality of this family who is very perverse family.

She is going to look at our file but she told us that it was already quite exhaustive.

We have testimonies ofy from two neighbors and, family members who came hometo our house, and several letters.

in a sequence it is better not to say "and...and...and...and..."

Indeed, she putinstalled wood floors and tiles instead of carpets and linoleums, so the noise is more perceivedptible than before.

floor, carpet, linoleum all general nouns - not usually pluralizable in this context

She dishould not have to changed the floor coverings without authorization, and damagethis worsened the sound quality between the flats.

The first part is to gain the nomination of an experstep in our case is to be assigned an expert technical consultant by a judge who will analyze her floorsing, and then we will take the court depending on the results.

"gain the nomination" sounds like you are the ones being nominated

The French legal system is complicated!

As far as the assault is concerned, we have no news.

I believe that the case has been dismissed.

You can attack people without being summoncited by the police.

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loringt

July 1, 2021

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Now, there are only two options.


Now,Currently there are only two options to resolve our problems with our neighbor.

It's a bit too abrupt to start a document with "now..." The reader has no idea if this is an interjection, a placement in the present moment or how it relates to what might have gone before.

The first one is to move but we like the neighborhood and she would be too pleased to have won.


The first one is to move, but we like the neighborhood and she would be too pleased to have won.

The second one is to go to court.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is going to be very expensive and long in time and energy but this is the only choice you have when you are facing a wall.


It is going toThat would be very expensive and take a long in time and energy, but this is the only choice you have when you are facing a wall.

The hardest part is to prove that this family is doing a lot of noise.


The hardest part is to prove that this family is doingmakes a lot of noise.

So, a court bailiff came to note that the noise did come from their apartment and he will come back a bit later.


It is difficult to find the right moment to call him because the noise can be intense but short-lived and starts again once he is gone.


It is difficult to find the right moment to call himsummon the bailiff because the noise can be intense but short-lived and will starts again once he is gone.

At the beginning of the week, with my mom, we went to see a lawyer who is specialized in property law.


At the beginning of the week, we went with my mom, we went to see a lawyer who is specializeds in property law.

One specializes in a professional field not "is specialized"

She was attentive to what we said and I think she managed to grasp the problem and the mentality of this family who is very perverse.


She was attentive to what we said and I think she managed to grasp the problem and the mentality of this family who is very perverse family.

She is going to look at our file but she told us that it was already quite exhaustive.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We have testimonies of two neighbors and family members who came home and several letters.


We have testimonies ofy from two neighbors and, family members who came hometo our house, and several letters.

in a sequence it is better not to say "and...and...and...and..."

The lawyer said that she did not respect the rules of the building.


Indeed, she put wood floors and tiles instead of carpets and linoleums so the noise is more perceived than before.


Indeed, she putinstalled wood floors and tiles instead of carpets and linoleums, so the noise is more perceivedptible than before.

floor, carpet, linoleum all general nouns - not usually pluralizable in this context

She did not have to change the floor coverings without authorization and damage the sound quality between the flats.


She dishould not have to changed the floor coverings without authorization, and damagethis worsened the sound quality between the flats.

The first part is to gain the nomination of an expert by a judge who will analyze her floors and then we will take the court depending on the resultats.


The French legal system is complicated!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As far as the assault is concerned, we have no news.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I believe that the case has been dismissed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can attack people without being summoned by the police.


You can attack people without being summoncited by the police.

So, a court bailiff came to note that the noise do come from their apartment and he will come back a bit later.


So, a court bailiff came to notedocument that the noise does come from their apartment, and he will come back a bit later.

Note can simply mean "observe" and can be informal.

Great!!


The first part is to gain the nomination of an expert by a judge who will analyze her floors and then we will take the court depending on the results.


The first part is to gain the nomination of an experstep in our case is to be assigned an expert technical consultant by a judge who will analyze her floorsing, and then we will take the court depending on the results.

"gain the nomination" sounds like you are the ones being nominated

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