Dec. 14, 2021
Negativity
I'm having a bad moment right now. For weeks, I have been indifferent around the life. I mean, I don't want to do my best efforts to do my different daily tasks, I can't find motivation in these actions.
Some years ago when I felt this sensation, I used to search for some tools to improve it, for example advices, motivational videos or stuff like that. But every time that I fell in this state of apathy it's harder to get out of here.
At least now I understand that it is something temporary and in some weeks I'll be better and wanting to eat the world. But anyway, I'd like to avoid these passages of the life. This because when I take a look at people who surrounded me, they seem to be always in a good moment, and I feel like I am left behind.
That's all folks, I just wanted to relief my mind.
Negativity
I'm having a bad moment right now.
For weeks, I have been indifferent around theto life.
I mean, I don't want to dogive my best efforts to docomplete my different daily tasks, I can't find motivation in these actions.
Some years ago when I felt this sensation, I used to search for some tools to improve it, for example advices, motivational videos or stuff like that.
But every time that I feall in this state of apathy it's harder to get out of here. (sentence is in present tense)
At least now I understand that it is something temporary and in some weeks I'll be better and wanting to eatcherish the world.
But anyway, I'd like to avoid these phassages of the life.
This is because when I take a look at people who surrounded me, they seem to be always in a good moment, and I feel like I am left behind.
That's all folks, I just wanted to give a relief my mind. (relief is a noun, relieve is the the verb)
Feedback
Good work! I like the way you liven up your text with different verbs, to make it sound more natural please check them through dictionaries. So that you get used to using the right ones. And cheer up!
Dec. 16, 2021
Thanks for your corrections, these are very useful :D
|
Negativity This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I'm having a bad moment right now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
For weeks, I have been indifferent around the life. For weeks, I have been indifferent |
|
I mean, I don't want to do my best efforts to do my different daily tasks, I can't find motivation in these actions. I mean, I don't want to |
|
Some years ago when I felt this sensation, I used to search for some tools to improve it, for example advices, motivational videos or stuff like that. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
But every time that I fell in this state of apathy it's harder to get out of here. But every time that I f |
|
At least now I understand that it is something temporary and in some weeks I'll be better and wanting to eat the world. At least now I understand that it is something temporary and in some weeks I'll be better and wanting to |
|
But anyway, I'd like to avoid these passages of the life. But anyway, I'd like to avoid these phas |
|
This because when I take a look at people who surrounded me, they seem to be always in a good moment, and I feel like I am left behind. This is because when I take a look at people who surround |
|
That's all folks, I just wanted to relief my mind. That's all folks, I just wanted to give a relief my mind. (relief is a noun, relieve is the the verb) |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium