When you reading this title, what willdo you think? When you read this title, what do you think?

present tense when asking a rhetorical question

When you reading this title, what willould you think? When reading this title, what would you think?

Anyway, we are one step closer to robot world. Anyway, we are one step closer to robot world.

Anyway, we are one step closer to a robot world. Anyway, we are one step closer to a robot world.

Remote-controlled robots will start working at selected Family Marts in Tokyo this summer Remote-controlled robots will start working at selected Family Marts in Tokyo this summer

plural

Remote-controlled robots will start working at selected Family Marts in Tokyo this summer Remote-controlled robots will start working at selected Family Marts in Tokyo this summer

I am ok with new things and ideas. I am ok with new things and ideas.

must have parallel construction. If you have plural 'things' you must have plural 'ideas'

I am ok with new things and ideas. I am ok with new things and ideas.

So, next time when I go to Tokyo, I will go there and buy something. So, next time I go to Tokyo, I will go there and buy something.

Maybe some people will feel sad about this. Maybe some people will feel sad about this.

Because a robot ihas taken a human’s job. Because a robot has taken a human’s job.

Because a robot is takening a human’s job. Because a robot is taking a human’s job.

Because of the safety reason. Because of the safety reason.

FA few years ago (in HK) a, 7-11 staff were killed byduring a shop theft. A few years ago (in HK), 7-11 staff were killed during a shop theft.

You would use "by" if the staff were killed by people. I think shop theft is more of a situation caused by a person, so I used "during".