Nov. 14, 2020
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Vanity is not always a mistake, at least, it pushes you to fight for those capitals that can make you proud. Always vain and always making progress.
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vVanity is not always a mistake, at least, it pushes you to fight for those capitals of being proudyour pride(?).
Vanity is not always a mistake, at least it pushes you to fight for your pride(?).
"Is not" is more commonly written as "isn't".
Always vain and always making progress.
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Great Job! I was a little confused on the last part of the middle sentence though.
Nov. 14, 2020
If you want to be vain, you must have vain capital, so you should strive to create capital that can make you proud. This is what I meant.
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vanity is not always a mistake, at least, it pushes you to fight for those capitals of being proud.
"Is not" is more commonly written as "isn't". |
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Always vain and always making progress. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Vanity is not always a mistake, at least, it pushes you to fight for those capitals that can make you proud. |
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