July 10, 2025
There are many species in our planet earth. But Humans are the wisest, cleverest a smartest one. We have thinking power that's make us different form other species. God made this planet for all species , but We are became very selfish . In every situation we saw our side , We don't think after that what happen , For an example when We cut a tree we don't think about bird who lives in the tree. Due to this cruel nature of human many species are extinct and many are have to extinct .Due to this nature is disbalanced , so we have to faces many problems like floods, earthquakes, tsunamis ,wildfires and many more . If we play with the nature the nature will also play with us reveling his destructive nature.
There are many species ion our planet e, Earth.
“Earth” is the name of a planet and is spelled with a capital “E.”
But Hhumans are the wisest, cleverest a smartest ones.
We have thinking power that's makes us different forom other species.
God made this planet for all species , but Wwe are became very selfish .
You can say, “…we are very selfish.” Or “…we became very selfish.”
In every situation we sawonly see our side ,. We don't think after thabout what happen ,s after. For an example, when Wwe cut a tree, we don't think about birds who lives in the tree.
You could say, “In every situation we only see our point of view.”
Due to this cruel nature of humans, many species are extinct and many are have towill become extinct .Due to this, nature is disunbalanced , so we have to faces many problems like floods, earthquakes, tsunamis ,wildfires and many more .
If we play with the nature the, nature will also play with us, revealing his destructive nature.
I would say, “…revealing its destructive nature.”
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I don’t think this is an easy topic for a beginner language learner to write about. You expressed yourself well and your writing is interesting.
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There are many animals species ion (our planet e) Earth.
Earth should be capitalized (proper noun)
We say "on" Earth ; "in" Earth would mean inside of it, like magma is inside the Earth
But Hhumans are the wisest, cleverest, and smartest one.
"Human" should not be capitalized here
We have a thinking power that's makes us different for/unique from other species.
"Unique" would be a better stylistic choice here, as it indicates something is different in a positive and rare manner.
God made this planet for all animal species , but Wwe ares humans became very selfish .
"We" should not be capitalized here.
It's good to clarify to the reader that you are defining "we" as us humans.
In every situation, we saw our side own perspective, Wwe doidn't think aftconsider othat what happen ,er consequences. For an example, when Wwe cut a tree down, we don't think about the birds who lives in the tree.
A couple of substitutions for better clarity. I changed bird to birds since it is typically not a single bird we find in trees.
Due to thise cruel nature of humans, many species are extinct, and many amore have twill go extinct .Due to this nature is dis. It's caused nature to become imbalanced , so we have to faces many additional problems, like floods, earthquakes, tsunamis , wildfires and many more .
To avoid repetition, changed the second "due to the" to "it's caused"
Even if humans did no harm, some natural catastrophes would still occur. Therefore, specify "additional" problems to mean that human interference have caused new ones to occur
If we play with the nature the, nature will also play with us, reveling hisin her destructive natureon.
Nature can either be referred to as "it" or "her." Nature can often be referred to as "mother nature."
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Good job.
Another general tip, there are no spaces before periods, but there are spaces after them.
If we play with the nature the nature will also play us reveling his destructive nature. |
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There are many species in our planet earth. There are many animals species Earth should be capitalized (proper noun) We say "on" Earth ; "in" Earth would mean inside of it, like magma is inside the Earth There are many species “Earth” is the name of a planet and is spelled with a capital “E.” |
But Humans are the wisest, cleverest a smartest one. But "Human" should not be capitalized here But |
We have thinking power that's make us different form other species. We have a thinking power that "Unique" would be a better stylistic choice here, as it indicates something is different in a positive and rare manner. We have thinking power that |
God made this planet for all species , but We are became very selfish . God made this planet for all animal species "We" should not be capitalized here. It's good to clarify to the reader that you are defining "we" as us humans. God made this planet for all species You can say, “…we are very selfish.” Or “…we became very selfish.” |
In every situation we saw our side , We don't think after that what happen , For an example when We cut a tree we don't think about bird who lives in the tree. In every situation, we saw our A couple of substitutions for better clarity. I changed bird to birds since it is typically not a single bird we find in trees. In every situation we You could say, “In every situation we only see our point of view.” |
Due to this cruel nature of human many species are extinct and many are have to extinct .Due to this nature is disbalanced , so we have to faces many problems like floods, earthquakes, tsunamis ,wildfires and many more . Due to th To avoid repetition, changed the second "due to the" to "it's caused" Even if humans did no harm, some natural catastrophes would still occur. Therefore, specify "additional" problems to mean that human interference have caused new ones to occur Due to this cruel nature of humans, many species are extinct and many |
If we play with the nature the nature will also play with us reveling his destructive nature. If we play with Nature can either be referred to as "it" or "her." Nature can often be referred to as "mother nature." If we play with the nature I would say, “…revealing its destructive nature.” |
In every situation we saw our side , We don't think after that what happen , For an example when We cut a tree we don't think about bird who's lives in the tree. |
Due to this cruel nature of human many species are extinct and many are primarily extinct .Due to this nature is disbalanced , so we have to faces many problems like floods, earthquakes, tsunamis ,wildfires and many more . |
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