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Jack

Oct. 1, 2020

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National Day

Today is national day. Since the founding of the people's Republic of China, it took only 71 years to achieve earth shaking changes and become the world's second largest economy. This rate of development is unique. I love my motherland and wish it prosperity. I love my countrymen and wish them happiness and health. I love my family and wish them a long and healthy life.

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Today is nour National dDay, which celebrates .....

I think it sounds better to combine the first two sentences.

Since..... the founding of the people's Republic of China, i. It took only 71 years for China to achieve earth shaking changes and become the world's second largest economy.

This rate of development is unique.

I love my motherlandcountry and wish for its prosperity.

I love my countrymen and wish them happiness and health.

I love my family and wish them a long and healthy life.

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Happy National Holiday for you and also happy moon festival.

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Jack

Oct. 2, 2020

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Thank you for your correction and best wishes.

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nschafer888

Oct. 5, 2020

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I watched a lot of the celebrations on YouTube. Very emotional!!!

National Day

Today is our national day.

Since the founding of the people's Republic of China, it took only 71 years to achieve earth shaking changes and become the world's second largest economy.

This rate of development is unique.

I love my motherland and wish it prosperity.

I love my countrymen and wish them happiness and health.

I love my family and wish them a long and healthy life.

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I hope you had a good day!

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Jack

Oct. 1, 2020

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谢谢你的修改。

National Day


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Today is national day.


Today is our national day.

Today is nour National dDay, which celebrates .....

I think it sounds better to combine the first two sentences.

Since the founding of the people's Republic of China, it took only 71 years to achieve earth shaking changes and become the world's second largest economy.


Since the founding of the people's Republic of China, it took only 71 years to achieve earth shaking changes and become the world's second largest economy.

Since..... the founding of the people's Republic of China, i. It took only 71 years for China to achieve earth shaking changes and become the world's second largest economy.

This rate of development is unique.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love my motherland and wish it prosperity.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love my motherlandcountry and wish for its prosperity.

I love my countrymen and wish them happiness and health.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love my family and wish them a long and healthy life.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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