Dec. 24, 2023
Nasty cough has been driving me nuts
A cold which has been lasting almost a whole month makes me kind of frustrated and feel like a helpless puppy curving at the corner. Relentless cough is really no joke, and I already took two weeks off for it. I’m going to be back to work tomorrow.
Mentally, I resist the idea of getting back to work, mainly because I haven’t fully recovered. At the beginning of the sickness I tried to live the life as usual, so I went to the gym as if I was unstoppable.
I remembered coach Huang- the owner of the gym- saw me saying“ why don’t you just stay home and get a good rest?” I said nothing but doing the double biceps pose and the most muscular pose towards him, which made him laugh.
Being a tough guy backfired on me the next day. My condition got worse. I was coughing so severely that I assumed my lungs would come out of the throat along with every single cough. Apparently my body ability doesn’t match my mental toughness . What a shame.
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Hope you feel better soon and don’t exhaust yourself at work too much. Lingering coughs are the worst!
Dec. 24, 2023
Appreciate your decent corrections and blessing.
Nasty cough has been driving me nuts
A cold which has been lasting almost a whole month makeshas made me kind of frustrated and feel like a helpless puppy curving at the corner.
I'm not sure what you mean by "curving" here, so I simplified the sentence a little.
RA relentless cough is really no joke, and I already took two weeks off for it.
I’m going to be back ato work tomorrow.
Or, "I'm going back to work tomorrow."
Mentally, I'm resisting the idea of getting back to work, mainly because I haven’t fully recovered.
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I remembered c Coach Huang- the owner of the gym- saw me saying“ wand said, “Why don’t you just stay home and get a good rest?” I said nothing but doingand did the double biceps pose and the most muscular pose towards himflexing pose, which made him laugh.
Being a tough guy backfired on me the next day.
My condition got worse.
I was coughing so severely that I assumedfelt like my lungs would come out of themy throat along with every single cough.
Apparently my body abil's immunity doesn’t match my mental toughness .
What a shame.
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I always make the same mistake. When I feel myself getting sick, I always think it's not so bad at first and do something strenuous like going to the gym. Sometimes I wonder if you rest immediately on the day you start to feel sick then you might recover faster. Hmm... Take care, and I hope you get better soon!
Dec. 24, 2023
Appreciate your decent corrections and blessing.
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Relentless cough is really no joke, and I already took two weeks off for it.
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