However, the themes of Hesse’s books are invariable the same; solitude, the feeling of not belonging anywhere, unrequesited love, and friendship between men always bordering on homosexual love.

"Unrequited" is I think a very specific word that I've only ever heard used in relation to love that is not reciprocated.

Narcissus, an erudite student, continues to nourishing his brain and soul with the aim in mind togoal of becomeing the cloister’s abbot.

I don't think it's possible to have "an erudite" - I think it can only be used as an adjective. Certainly I can't find a noun form in the OED.

In fact, when his master, from whom Goldmund learned the art of carving, offers him a post in the Artisan Guild andlong with his daughter's hand, Goldmundo rejects the proposal, horrified at the ideaprospect of becoming parta member of the gentry.

"Horrified at the idea" works fine too :-)

But when Goldmund is in trouble, once again due to a woman, is the destiny the one who gathers the two friends together again.

Very brave! There's a heated, ongoing debate as to whether or not it's acceptable to start a sentence with "but", "because" or "and".

According to the Internet (so it must be true!) it's been written thus since the 10th Century and there are legion examples of its use in Shakespeare and so on.

Despite the fact that I think it's useful - it gives warning that something is about to happen - It will make *some* people uneasy to see it. I was taught never to do it - and although I often want to do it myself I avoid it for fear of it being irksome.

Nonetheless, Narcissus never reincriminates his friend, indeed he takes him back to the cloister so that Goldmundo can heal his physical and emotional wounds.

I wasn't sure why "recriminate" doesn't quite work so I checked the dictionary and it is an intransitive verb. Apparently it can have a subject only, no object.

NARCISSUS and GOLDMUNDarcissus and Goldmund

Herman Hesse was one of the mainost prominent German writers of the past century.

His bibliography is vast and varied, ranging betweenfrom narrative andto poetry.

However, the themes of Hesse’s books are invariable the same; solitude, the feeling of not belonging anywhere, unrequested love, and friendship between men always bordering on homosexual love.

The story revolves around two friends totally opposites one to the otherwho are complete opposites.

On the one hand, Narcissus is a young novice, utterly religious, and self-aware.

Meanwhile, Goldmund, who is a more mundane type of person, is constantly looking up to his friend and makinges efforts to keep up with Narcissus' spiritual endeavors.

However, Narcissus, who has the gift to look into the other’s’ souls, realizes that Goldmundo’s soul is not made tofor the monastic life, and with profound grief impels his friend to leave the cloister and to insert himself into society.

Goldmund accepts the truth from his friend's lips and leaves the cloister, promising to come back someday.

This is how, both friends part ways and begging, each one separately, to build to forge their own paths.

Narcissus, an erudite, continues to nourishing his brain and soul with the aim in mind togoal of becomeing the cloister’s abbot.

WMeanwhile, his beloved friend becomes a vagabond, roaming through forests and villages looking for new experiences, hungry for romantic affairs.

He comes to value his freedom more than anything, and he is not willing to compromise his liberty for neither for a woman nor for financial stability, let alone for prestige.

In fact, when his master, from whom Goldmund learned the art of carving, offers him a post in the Artisan Guild and his daughter's hand, Goldmundo rejects the proposal, horrified at the idea of becoming part of the gentry.

ButHowever, when Goldmund is in trouble, once again due to a woman, is the destiny the one who gatherbrings the two friends together again.

The reencounter is unexpected, and Narcissus finds Goldmund in bad standing.

Nonetheless, Narcissus never recriminates his friend, indeed; rather, he takes him back to the cloister so that Goldmundo can heal his physical and emotional wounds.

Herman Hesse was one of the mainjor German writers of the past century.

Slightly more natural to say "major".

However, the themes of Hesse’s books are invariabley the same; solitude, the feeling of not belonging anywhere, unrequested love, and friendship between men always bordering on homosexual love.

Adverb "invariably" instead of adjective "invariable"

The story revolves around two friends totally opposites one to the to one another.

Opposite does not become plural in English. "to one another" is the correct phrase for comparing two

However, Narcissus, who has the gift to look into the other’s soul, realizes that Goldmundo’s soul is not made tofor the monastic life, and with profound grief impels his friend to leave the cloister and to insert himself in society.

Narcissus, an erudite, continues to nourishing his brain and soul with the aim in mind to become the cloister’s abbot.

But when Goldmund is in trouble, once again due to a woman, is thet is destiny the one whoat gathers the two friends together again.