March 27, 2023
Napoleon III, Meiji Emperor, and Shogunate (2)
A year before the war. The Shogunate sent a delegation t visit France and Britain asking for support. Britain refused, but Napoleon III accepted. Here, I highly suspect that the French emperor couldn't differentiate the difference between the emperor and Shogunate in Japan, maybe he thought the Shogunate represent the emperor.
Why I have this strange idea? Because even the known American Naval Commander Perry, when he docked his warships in Japan for the first time, he thought the negotiator from the Shogunate was on behalf of the emperor of Japan. They didn't know the most powerful man in Japan only challenge and fight for the leader of the Shogunate, they didn't care about who the emperor was. I am curious whether the French emperor knew this or not, he should support an emperor like him, but not generals in Japan. There would be fascinating answers to this hypothesis if we find the record in the library.
Anyway, in 1869, the French-supported army was defeated in the critical Boshin War. The Meiji Restoration finally succeeded.
Next, I will give another short entry into Meiji Emperor, stating why he insists the political reform.
Napoleon III, the Meiji Emperor, and the Shogunate (2)
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The Meiji Restoration finally succeeded.
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とても面白かったです。上手に書けています！
March 28, 2023
直してくださってありがとうございます!:-)
The Shogunate sent a delegation to visit France and Britain asking for support.
Here, I highly suspect that the French emperor couldn't differentiate the difference between the emperor and Shogunate in Japan, m. Maybe he thought the Shogunate represented the emperor.
Why do I have this strange idea?
Because even the known American Naval Commander Perry, when he docked his warships in Japan for the first time, he thought the negotiator from the Shogunate wasacted on behalf of the emperor of Japan.
They didn't know the most powerful maen in Japan only challenged and fiought for the leader of the Shogunate, t. They didn't care about who the emperor was.
It's the Japanese men that don't care for the emperor? A bit unclear.
I am curious whether the French emperor knew this or not, h. He should support an emperor like him, but not generals in Japan.
Anyway, in 1869, the French-supported army was defeated in the critical Boshin War.
The Meiji Restoration finally succeeded.
Next time, I will give another short entry intoon the Meiji Emperor, statdiscussing why he insists the political reform.
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Great job! It is clear you have a passion for history.
March 28, 2023
Yes, I believe learning history can help us handle current affairs. Thank you! :-)
Napoleon III, Meiji Emperor, and Shogunate (2)
A year before the war.
The Shogunate sent a delegation to visit France and Britain, asking for support.
Britain refused, but Napoleon III accepted.
Here, I highly suspect that the French emperor couldn't differentiate the difference between the emperor and Shogunate in Japan, maybe he thought the Shogunate represent the emperor.
Why I have this strange idea?
Because even the known American Naval Commander Perry, when he docked his warships in Japan for the first time, he thought that the negotiator from the Shogunate was on behalf of the emperor of Japan.
If you establish who the subject is then you don't need to include it for the rest of the sentence! But if you have another sentence then you will need to include it. This makes it sound more fluid within a sentence.
They didn't know the most powerful man in Japan only challenged and fiought for the leader of the Shogunate, they didn't care about who the emperor was.
I am curious whether the French emperor knew this or not, he should've support an emperor like him, but not generals in Japan.
If you just wrote "he should" then that means that you want the French emperor to do something in the present.
There would be fascinating answers to this hypothesis if we fiound the record in the library.
Anyway, in 1869, the French-supported army was defeated in the critical Boshin War.
The Meiji Restoration finally succeeded.
Next, I will give another short entry into Meiji Emperor, stating why he insistsed the political reform.
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Great job!
March 28, 2023
Thank you for your corrections! :-)
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