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I am still waiting for my dream school's offer. I am still waiting for my dream school's offer.

Alt: I am still waiting for an offer from my dream school.

I chose to major in computer science as my major, because it is a competitive skill to help merequired major in order to work and live in another country. I chose to major in computer science, because it is a required major in order to work and live in another country.

I chose computer science as my major, because it is a competitive skill to help me live in another country. I chose computer science as my major, because it is a competitive skill to help me live in another country.

The only bit of this sentence that actually sounds strange to me is "a competitive skill to help me (...)" - maybe this is better, "a competitive skill, that will help me". Also I think "skillset" might be better than "skill", since computer science is a whole field of knowledge, a range of skills.

I chose to major in computer science as my major because it is a competitive skill to help mefield and would give me the opportunity to live in another country. I chose to major in computer science because it is a competitive field and would give me the opportunity to live in another country.

This month, I practiced speaking English every day, and I dream tof going to New York City. This month, I practiced speaking English every day, and I dream of going to New York City.

This month, I practiced speaking English every day, and. I dream to go to New York City. This month, I practiced speaking English every day. I dream to go to New York City.

Possibly neater to break this sentence up - or probably better to say, "This month, I practiced speaking English every day, because I dream of going to New York City".

This month, I practiced speaking English every day, and. I dream tof going to New York City. This month, I practiced speaking English every day. I dream of going to New York City.

But hHowever, through friends and online forums, I learned that the competition is so fierce this year, and many talented candidates arewill not be selected. However, through friends and online forums, I learned that the competition is so fierce this year, and many talented candidates will not be selected.

But hHowever, through friends and online forums, I learned that the competition is so fierce this year, andthat many talented candidates are not selhave been rejected. However, through friends and online forums, I learned that the competition is so fierce this year, that many talented candidates have been rejected.

Definitely don't write "But,". You can start a sentence with "But" without a comma though of course! The other reviewer assumed you wanted to use the future tense "will not be selected". I think that was probably your intention too, but I suggested an alternative...

But hHowever, through friends and online forums, I learned that the competition is so fierce this year, and m. Many talented candidates are not selhave been rejected. However, through friends and online forums, I learned that competition is fierce this year. Many talented candidates have been rejected.

Hope I have good luck! Hope I have good luck!

Alt: Hopefully, I will have better luck!

I also have to considerneed to have a plan B ofor theis situation that perhaps, which objective factors wouldmay prevent me from leaving where I live.my country I also need to have a plan B for this situation, which objective factors may prevent me from leaving my country

I also have to consider plan B ofor the situation, that perhaps objective factors would prevent me from leaving where I live. I also have to consider plan B for the situation, that perhaps objective factors would prevent me from leaving where I live.

There is nothing wrong with this sentence, except for "of" --> "for".

That said, I also have to consider plan B of the situation that perhaps. Perhaps there are objective factors that would prevent me from leaving where I live, which is why I have decided to start my job search this month. That said, I also have to consider plan B. Perhaps there are objective factors that would prevent me from leaving where I live, which is why I have decided to start my job search this month.

So I have decided to start finding jobs this month. So I have decided to start finding job this month.

So I have decided to start finding jobs this month.

I have two internship experiences, so I am not scaredconfident to be interviewed. I have two internship experiences, so I am confident to be interviewed.

I have two internship experiences, so I am not scared tof interviews. I have two internship experiences, so I am not scared of interviews.

I have had two internship experiences, so I am not scared to intervconfident about my abilitiews. I have had two internship experiences so I am confident about my abilities.

ButHowever, I have never been to an interviewed in English before. However, I have never interviewed in English before.

This time I would tryI plan to apply for positions at some international companies, have fun!. I plan to apply for positions at some international companies.