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Leeve

Aug. 17, 2024

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Bagel

Hello, first time here!

Bagels look really fancy in bakeries.
I've never thought bagels were good before.
But I have only eaten a few times, maybe I haven't tried enough.
I think I should choose a good bakery, and try to eat them with something else, like cream cheese, instead of just on their own.
If after all the trying I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels.
Let those who like it enjoy it!

🥯

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Bagel

Hello, first time here!

Bagels look really fancy in bakeries.

I've never thought bagels were good before.

I think I should choose a good bakery, and try to eat them with something else, like cream cheese, instead of just on their own.

If after all the trying I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels.

Let those who like it enjoy it!

🥯

I've never thought bagels were good before.

I think I should choose a good bakery, and try to eat them with something else, like cream cheese, instead of just on their own.

Let those who like it enjoy it!

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Leeve

Aug. 18, 2024

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Hello, first time here!

Bagels look really fancy in bakeries.

If after all the trying I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels.

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Leeve

Aug. 18, 2024

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JoeTofu

Aug. 18, 2024

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Bagel

Hello, first time here!

Bagels look really fancy in bakeries.

I've never thought bagels were good before.

I think I should choose a good bakery, and try to eat them with something else, like cream cheese, instead of just on their own.

🥯

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Leeve

Aug. 18, 2024

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Leeve

Aug. 18, 2024

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Bagel


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Bagels Bagels

Plural is more natural unless you’re writing about a specific bagel.

Bagels Bagels

ALSO POSSIBLE: About bagels

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Hello, first time here!


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Bagels look really fancy in bakeries.


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Bagels usually look really fancy in most bakeries. Bagels usually look really fancy in most bakeries.

SUGGESTION: Hedge the sentence with words such as "usually" or "most" since exceptions do exist. / 提案:例外は存在するので、「通常 」や 「ほとんどの場合 」といった言葉で文章をくくる。 / 建议:用 “通常 ”或 “大多数 ”等词对句子进行对冲,因为例外情况确实存在。

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I've never thought bagels were good before.


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I've never thought bagels were good before. I've never thought bagels were good.

“Before” would imply that something has changed since the time “before,” like you’ve changed your mind.

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But I have only eaten a few times, maybe I haven't tried enough.


But I have only eaten them a few times, maybe I haven't tried enough. But I have only eaten them a few times, maybe I haven't tried enough.

You have to add the "them" here, or else it sounds like you have only eaten a few time in your whole life :)

But I have only eaten them a few times, maybe I haven't tried enough. But I have only eaten them a few times, maybe I haven't tried enough.

But I have only eaten them a few times, so maybe I haven't tried enough. But I have only eaten them a few times, so maybe I haven't tried enough.

You could merge this with the previous sentence: I've never thought bagels were good, but I have only eaten them a few times, so maybe I haven't tried enough.

But I have only eaten a few times, maybe IHowever, perhaps I haven't tried enough of them. However, perhaps I haven't tried enough of them.

But I have only eaten them a few times, maybe I haven't tried enough. But I have only eaten them a few times, maybe I haven't tried enough.

I think I should choose a good bakery, and try to eat them with something else, like cream cheese, instead of just on their own.


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I think I should choose a good bakery, and try (to eat) them with something else, like cream cheese, instead of just on their own. I think I should choose a good bakery, and try (to eat) them with something else, like cream cheese, instead of just on their own.

It would sound more natural without “to eat.”

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If after all the trying I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels.


If after all the tryingtrying them like this I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels. If after trying them like this I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels.

I'm not sure exactly what you mean by "all the trying", but it's not grammatically correct. I tried to suggest something that sounds natural to me

If after all the tryingis, I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels. If after all this, I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels.

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If after all the trying I still feel the same, then I guess I probablyI still do not like bagels in this way, then perhaps I just don't like bagels. If I still do not like bagels in this way, then perhaps I just don't like bagels.

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Let those who like it enjoy it!


Let those who like ithem enjoy ithem! Let those who like them enjoy them!

Bagels are plural so it needs to be "them" instead of "it".

Let those who like ithem enjoy it! Let those who like them enjoy it!

Let those who like ithem enjoy ithem! Let those who like them enjoy them!

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